Comments received on poems by Alexa Pineda
To My Light
dusk arising said:
And the sad truth is that the very fire can burn painfully into your newfound hope.
For you i hope it does not.
Really associated with every line here. Amazing writing.
Into my favourites
July 6th, 2019 11:11
dusk arising said:
And the sad truth is that the very fire can burn painfully into your newfound hope.
For you i hope it does not.
Really associated with every line here. Amazing writing.
Into my favourites
July 6th, 2019 11:11
Internal Conflict
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, great writing, great imagery, great choice of words, great subject. What else can I say, Alexa? This is good.
October 28th, 2017 13:03
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, great writing, great imagery, great choice of words, great subject. What else can I say, Alexa? This is good.
October 28th, 2017 13:03
Internal Conflict
Fay Slimm. said:
A first rate picture of both dark and light which make such conflict - - am so pleased to have caught this thought provoking and powerful write Alexa
October 28th, 2017 05:15
Fay Slimm. said:
A first rate picture of both dark and light which make such conflict - - am so pleased to have caught this thought provoking and powerful write Alexa
October 28th, 2017 05:15
An Ending Universe
A.C Doomcraft said:
Love the message and the use of planetary bodies to convey that
Im quite a scifi nerd so a fading love explained in this way really speaks to me
October 26th, 2017 07:09
A.C Doomcraft said:
Love the message and the use of planetary bodies to convey that
Im quite a scifi nerd so a fading love explained in this way really speaks to me
October 26th, 2017 07:09
An Ending Universe
FredPeyer said:
Alexa, even though I think that your poem is very well written, I am not sure if I am getting the right meaning. Are you using the sun and the moon as a metaphor for a broken love? If they were never together, what changed? Why were they content not being together before, but not anymore now?
Sorry, maybe too many questions, but I am trying to understand your poem. Maybe I am too old and daft! :-)
October 26th, 2017 04:50
FredPeyer said:
Alexa, even though I think that your poem is very well written, I am not sure if I am getting the right meaning. Are you using the sun and the moon as a metaphor for a broken love? If they were never together, what changed? Why were they content not being together before, but not anymore now?
Sorry, maybe too many questions, but I am trying to understand your poem. Maybe I am too old and daft! :-)
October 26th, 2017 04:50
To My Grandfather, For My Dad, From your Granddaughter
FredPeyer said:
As both a father and a grand-father, I could only wish to have a poem like yours written by one of my grand children! Beautiful, well written, so full of love and caring. Alexa, you are a good writer, and judging from only this one poem, a good person.
October 26th, 2017 04:45
FredPeyer said:
As both a father and a grand-father, I could only wish to have a poem like yours written by one of my grand children! Beautiful, well written, so full of love and caring. Alexa, you are a good writer, and judging from only this one poem, a good person.
October 26th, 2017 04:45
To My Grandfather, For My Dad, From your Granddaughter
Kimi brockley said:
LOVE THIS
October 23rd, 2017 16:21
Kimi brockley said:
LOVE THIS
October 23rd, 2017 16:21
