Comments received on poems by Lee Renard Caspian
Red Balloon
Laura🌻 said:
So sad Lee! So much said in a few lines!
A good write, but a sad read!
October 30th, 2017 01:48
Laura🌻 said:
So sad Lee! So much said in a few lines!
A good write, but a sad read!
October 30th, 2017 01:48
Be Still
orchidee said:
Good write Lee. This could adjust slightly to fit a hymn of same theme: \'Be still my soul\'. Tune name: Finlandia. Though there are 10 syllables to each line.
October 29th, 2017 02:18
orchidee said:
Good write Lee. This could adjust slightly to fit a hymn of same theme: \'Be still my soul\'. Tune name: Finlandia. Though there are 10 syllables to each line.
October 29th, 2017 02:18
Broken Mirrors
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, Lee. Nice structure, and well written too. Like the line \'closed doors mean open windows\'. Kudos!
October 27th, 2017 18:30
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, Lee. Nice structure, and well written too. Like the line \'closed doors mean open windows\'. Kudos!
October 27th, 2017 18:30
Broken Mirrors
w c said:
Thanks Lee! This is a very beautiful poem! Congratulations!
October 27th, 2017 12:16
w c said:
Thanks Lee! This is a very beautiful poem! Congratulations!
October 27th, 2017 12:16
Broken Mirrors
Laura🌻 said:
Beautiful poem...
beautiful message!
Always follow the light!
It will guide us!
October 27th, 2017 04:44
Laura🌻 said:
Beautiful poem...
beautiful message!
Always follow the light!
It will guide us!
October 27th, 2017 04:44
Depression
myself and me said:
Feel your struggle, feel your pain. Open yourself to someone you could trust, who could understand you and support you is so important for you to win this war. Fight with depression could be hard, but do not give up, at the end, you will win. A big hug from me. Welcome to this site. A well expressed poem.
October 26th, 2017 08:20
myself and me said:
Feel your struggle, feel your pain. Open yourself to someone you could trust, who could understand you and support you is so important for you to win this war. Fight with depression could be hard, but do not give up, at the end, you will win. A big hug from me. Welcome to this site. A well expressed poem.
October 26th, 2017 08:20
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