Comments received on poems by Lee Renard Caspian
Sunset Hair
Neville said:
sounds like my kind of girl... a delight to read my friend..Neville
February 12th, 2019 07:01
Neville said:
sounds like my kind of girl... a delight to read my friend..Neville
February 12th, 2019 07:01
Glass Lips
Fay Slimm. said:
Powerful write Lee - an apt word is \"contortionist\" where vulnerablity thrives yet this is what happens when love takes a-hold. An engaging read.
February 4th, 2019 03:54
Fay Slimm. said:
Powerful write Lee - an apt word is \"contortionist\" where vulnerablity thrives yet this is what happens when love takes a-hold. An engaging read.
February 4th, 2019 03:54
Tired
Michael Edwards said:
I will be interested to see what you add to it but I love it as it is.
May 23rd, 2018 00:08
Michael Edwards said:
I will be interested to see what you add to it but I love it as it is.
May 23rd, 2018 00:08
The Abusive Church
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, the last stanza tells it how it should be but there are some who behave like the first stanza - is that Christianity - I don\'t think so. Forgive all.
April 24th, 2018 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, the last stanza tells it how it should be but there are some who behave like the first stanza - is that Christianity - I don\'t think so. Forgive all.
April 24th, 2018 00:18
The Abusive Church
blessednloved said:
This is an awesome Write! Thanks for the great words!
April 23rd, 2018 15:55
blessednloved said:
This is an awesome Write! Thanks for the great words!
April 23rd, 2018 15:55
The Abusive Church
onepauly said:
meditate on the last stanza
and forget the rest.
April 23rd, 2018 15:01
onepauly said:
meditate on the last stanza
and forget the rest.
April 23rd, 2018 15:01
Star-Studded Skin
Nicholas Browning said:
I would most certainly tear through galaxies given the chance.
April 17th, 2018 05:27
Nicholas Browning said:
I would most certainly tear through galaxies given the chance.
April 17th, 2018 05:27
The demon behind my irises
Velvetlascivious said:
I\'m trapped in a loop that leads right back, to the part of my mind that I seem to lack 💜💜💜💜💜 amazing... I feel this shit in my soul. Keep writing I want more
April 16th, 2018 12:12
Velvetlascivious said:
I\'m trapped in a loop that leads right back, to the part of my mind that I seem to lack 💜💜💜💜💜 amazing... I feel this shit in my soul. Keep writing I want more
April 16th, 2018 12:12
Thoughts
Resa71 said:
A lot of emotions!
I can relate to this poem in so many ways.
I really appreciate you sharing it.
Thank you!
Resa :)
April 13th, 2018 01:31
Resa71 said:
A lot of emotions!
I can relate to this poem in so many ways.
I really appreciate you sharing it.
Thank you!
Resa :)
April 13th, 2018 01:31
Depression
Noni said:
\"If my body was broken,
Then you’d rush to my side,
But because it’s my spirit,
You just try to hide.
You don’t want to see something,
That you know you can’t fix,
So you try to pretend that it doesn’t exist.\"
The BEST thing I\'ve read on this site so far.
April 12th, 2018 20:23
Noni said:
\"If my body was broken,
Then you’d rush to my side,
But because it’s my spirit,
You just try to hide.
You don’t want to see something,
That you know you can’t fix,
So you try to pretend that it doesn’t exist.\"
The BEST thing I\'ve read on this site so far.
April 12th, 2018 20:23
Edges
Laura🌻 said:
Like the structure and
the message very much!
It is that edge that
challenges us!
November 5th, 2017 07:48
Laura🌻 said:
Like the structure and
the message very much!
It is that edge that
challenges us!
November 5th, 2017 07:48
Burnt
orchidee said:
Oohh not yet - too young, if this is factual for yourself. Whoosh! Bucket of water to put out the fire! lol.
November 4th, 2017 09:10
orchidee said:
Oohh not yet - too young, if this is factual for yourself. Whoosh! Bucket of water to put out the fire! lol.
November 4th, 2017 09:10
Scars
olivergreenwood19 said:
This is fantastic and they are right, that last stanza hits very hard and carries a lot of power. Great write.
November 3rd, 2017 12:42
olivergreenwood19 said:
This is fantastic and they are right, that last stanza hits very hard and carries a lot of power. Great write.
November 3rd, 2017 12:42
Scars
FredPeyer said:
Very nicely written, Lee! Love that last stanza! Great structure too.
November 3rd, 2017 00:32
FredPeyer said:
Very nicely written, Lee! Love that last stanza! Great structure too.
November 3rd, 2017 00:32
To Anyone:
Anna Marg said:
I can relate to that! I\'m the kind of person that likes to face my problems alone and find it hard to let others in!
November 2nd, 2017 03:32
Anna Marg said:
I can relate to that! I\'m the kind of person that likes to face my problems alone and find it hard to let others in!
November 2nd, 2017 03:32
Depression
Anna Marg said:
It\'s ok to open up to someone! Not everyone is gonna run away. \'\'If my body was broken,
Then you’d rush to my side,
But because it’s my spirit,
You just try to hide.
You don’t want to see something,
That you know you can’t fix,
So you try to pretend that it doesn’t exist.\'\' Those were my favorite lines!
November 1st, 2017 02:21
Anna Marg said:
It\'s ok to open up to someone! Not everyone is gonna run away. \'\'If my body was broken,
Then you’d rush to my side,
But because it’s my spirit,
You just try to hide.
You don’t want to see something,
That you know you can’t fix,
So you try to pretend that it doesn’t exist.\'\' Those were my favorite lines!
November 1st, 2017 02:21
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