In the coarse and barren winter
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

so sad , when animals lose their life in the winter. i love your reference to the fox in this piece of writing , and your mention of the wind singing a sad and lonely song , you have given the woods an atmosphere of stillness, yet sad loneliness, and the fox weeping through the snow .. a great piece of writing!

February 24th, 2018 10:42

Lost boy
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

wow, really good , i\'m loving this :-) so well expressed , flowed really well and you had some good ideas going on there . he made his mother proud , despite is initial reluctance to listen , being dark and mean , he then acted kind and saved a girls life

February 22nd, 2018 19:27

Lost boy
Laura🌻 said:

After all that was said and done, that mother would be proud !
A good write, with an honorable ending!

~Laura~

February 22nd, 2018 17:54