Comments received on poems by LonlyOne
One heart with a hundred losses.
willyweed said:
I have to agree with Hope, nice work. ww
March 13th, 2018 12:25
willyweed said:
I have to agree with Hope, nice work. ww
March 13th, 2018 12:25
One heart with a hundred losses.
Hope said:
I can definitely relate to this. I also really love the last line of your piece! Thanks for sharing.
March 13th, 2018 12:22
Hope said:
I can definitely relate to this. I also really love the last line of your piece! Thanks for sharing.
March 13th, 2018 12:22
Finding love in this day in Age.
Herjourney said:
I feel the exact same way . People do things for a social world of brings they well never meet and past life friends to seem like everything is okay. No one likes to talk on the phone or vibe like the old days . A quick text and two emojis now means it\'s love at first send .lol. funny I honestly feel for the generations to come had seem to be leading up to nothing but hatred for true happiness of self and of others with each other . Nice write I do believe
February 15th, 2018 19:04
Herjourney said:
I feel the exact same way . People do things for a social world of brings they well never meet and past life friends to seem like everything is okay. No one likes to talk on the phone or vibe like the old days . A quick text and two emojis now means it\'s love at first send .lol. funny I honestly feel for the generations to come had seem to be leading up to nothing but hatred for true happiness of self and of others with each other . Nice write I do believe
February 15th, 2018 19:04
Cover for the pain.
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i think quite often we can cloud over what is truly causing us pain . a true and honest write , well expressed
February 15th, 2018 17:37
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i think quite often we can cloud over what is truly causing us pain . a true and honest write , well expressed
February 15th, 2018 17:37
Finding love in this day in Age.
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
hello lonelyone , an interesting piece of writing , i like how you question peoples basis for wantinig a relationship ..i guess there are some people out there who are seeking something else, yet they pretend its just love . interesting write , loved reading this
February 15th, 2018 17:15
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
hello lonelyone , an interesting piece of writing , i like how you question peoples basis for wantinig a relationship ..i guess there are some people out there who are seeking something else, yet they pretend its just love . interesting write , loved reading this
February 15th, 2018 17:15
1000 years!
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good loving write. With love those 1000 years are but a moment.
February 12th, 2018 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good loving write. With love those 1000 years are but a moment.
February 12th, 2018 02:25
Alway\'s Falling!
Mugsdaddy said:
If only a pair of slip-proof shoes would help, unfortunately they don\'t make those in size Life... Or Life-size... Either way great write.
Mugsdaddy
November 2nd, 2017 14:41
Mugsdaddy said:
If only a pair of slip-proof shoes would help, unfortunately they don\'t make those in size Life... Or Life-size... Either way great write.
Mugsdaddy
November 2nd, 2017 14:41
dont want love but true love.
Lee Renard Caspian said:
Lovely poem! I love the message of not seeking fleeting love that has not a foundation of commitment. I would suggest working on editing for spelling though, as it can distract from the message and flow.
November 1st, 2017 00:37
Lee Renard Caspian said:
Lovely poem! I love the message of not seeking fleeting love that has not a foundation of commitment. I would suggest working on editing for spelling though, as it can distract from the message and flow.
November 1st, 2017 00:37
Lonely one!
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true, two souls can combine as one to create a better life. Good write.
October 30th, 2017 02:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true, two souls can combine as one to create a better life. Good write.
October 30th, 2017 02:34
