Comments received on poems by Jaybirdy1
Emily\'s Rose
Christina8 said:
Well it started out lovely anyway. You do have a gift for writing. I just didn\'t expect the last line is all!
November 1st, 2017 16:57
Christina8 said:
Well it started out lovely anyway. You do have a gift for writing. I just didn\'t expect the last line is all!
November 1st, 2017 16:57
Emily\'s Rose
Anna Marg said:
It went so smoothly and then the end.. well I didn\'t expect that !
November 1st, 2017 09:45
Anna Marg said:
It went so smoothly and then the end.. well I didn\'t expect that !
November 1st, 2017 09:45
Reflections of a Stranger
Anna Marg said:
It\'s true that sometimes we can do things that made us wonder who we really are since that person is far from what we remember ourselves to be. Change is not always for the worst though! Sometimes in order to survive we need to make decisions we wouldnt otherwise.
October 31st, 2017 10:21
Anna Marg said:
It\'s true that sometimes we can do things that made us wonder who we really are since that person is far from what we remember ourselves to be. Change is not always for the worst though! Sometimes in order to survive we need to make decisions we wouldnt otherwise.
October 31st, 2017 10:21
Reflections of a Stranger
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Welcome JAY ~ Thanks for tour first poem ~ very true and something we can all empathise with. When I look in the mirror (especially before I\'ve woken up I see my DAD who is 27 years older than me ! It make me groom up to face the World ! The other thing is none of us (especially Men) have a perfectly symmetrical face so what we see in the mirror (a reversed mirror image) looks nothing like we see in a photograph. Personally I would abolish all mirrors along with all mobiles phones ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
October 31st, 2017 10:08
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Welcome JAY ~ Thanks for tour first poem ~ very true and something we can all empathise with. When I look in the mirror (especially before I\'ve woken up I see my DAD who is 27 years older than me ! It make me groom up to face the World ! The other thing is none of us (especially Men) have a perfectly symmetrical face so what we see in the mirror (a reversed mirror image) looks nothing like we see in a photograph. Personally I would abolish all mirrors along with all mobiles phones ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
October 31st, 2017 10:08
