Comments received on poems by poemsbyliz
Conversations with the Universe
Shadowbox15 said:
They go to me. I get thoughts like those at random moments within the day.
November 20th, 2017 13:18
Shadowbox15 said:
They go to me. I get thoughts like those at random moments within the day.
November 20th, 2017 13:18
A Poem About Sad Poems
myself and me said:
sadness is a strong and powerful emotion. It triggers impulse for writing.
November 16th, 2017 13:31
myself and me said:
sadness is a strong and powerful emotion. It triggers impulse for writing.
November 16th, 2017 13:31
I Know It\'s Only Tuesday, but I\'m Tired
FredPeyer said:
These weekends can do that to you anytime, Liz!
Just kidding!
I do like the way you use the Tuesday blues as a metaphor for sadness, maybe disappointment, heartache? Your few lines leave the poem wide open for interpretation. Good writing, like it!
November 9th, 2017 00:29
FredPeyer said:
These weekends can do that to you anytime, Liz!
Just kidding!
I do like the way you use the Tuesday blues as a metaphor for sadness, maybe disappointment, heartache? Your few lines leave the poem wide open for interpretation. Good writing, like it!
November 9th, 2017 00:29
I Know It\'s Only Tuesday, but I\'m Tired
Seek said:
Hard to believe the sadness in your poem after looking at your photo. I see enthusiasm in your eyes; those eyes also speak of a bright future and countless dreams that await you. It may be only Tuesday, but by Wednesday, you will be awash with energy and optimism.
November 9th, 2017 00:03
Seek said:
Hard to believe the sadness in your poem after looking at your photo. I see enthusiasm in your eyes; those eyes also speak of a bright future and countless dreams that await you. It may be only Tuesday, but by Wednesday, you will be awash with energy and optimism.
November 9th, 2017 00:03
Murder of the Soul
FredPeyer said:
\'Killing me softly with his song\'....
Nicely written, Liz, with a lot of emotion between the lines.
November 6th, 2017 03:19
FredPeyer said:
\'Killing me softly with his song\'....
Nicely written, Liz, with a lot of emotion between the lines.
November 6th, 2017 03:19
Love Is a Very Hungry Caterpillar
orchidee said:
Another thing is - I don\'t write cryptically. This poem here flows easily. I suppose if we do write complicated stuff, we know what it means, but not much use if no-one else knows what it means!
November 6th, 2017 02:38
orchidee said:
Another thing is - I don\'t write cryptically. This poem here flows easily. I suppose if we do write complicated stuff, we know what it means, but not much use if no-one else knows what it means!
November 6th, 2017 02:38
Love Is a Very Hungry Caterpillar
orchidee said:
A fine write Liz. Love is.... my hungry guinea pigs too! We can\'t fool them if they know food is about.
Doh! I went to one poetry group. They snubbed me a bit, mainly as I do mainly spiritual writes. I had to sit through some guff there, and pretend to like their poems, I can tell you! lol.
November 3rd, 2017 02:53
orchidee said:
A fine write Liz. Love is.... my hungry guinea pigs too! We can\'t fool them if they know food is about.
Doh! I went to one poetry group. They snubbed me a bit, mainly as I do mainly spiritual writes. I had to sit through some guff there, and pretend to like their poems, I can tell you! lol.
November 3rd, 2017 02:53
Love Is a Very Hungry Caterpillar
Nicholas M. Langford said:
Reminiscent of my childhood, the metaphorical us of the caterpillar is, to me, a powerful allusion. In a way the innocence of my adolescent interpretation of the children\'s book, \"The Very Hungry Caterpillar,\" takes on a matured insight through your poem.
November 2nd, 2017 23:12
Nicholas M. Langford said:
Reminiscent of my childhood, the metaphorical us of the caterpillar is, to me, a powerful allusion. In a way the innocence of my adolescent interpretation of the children\'s book, \"The Very Hungry Caterpillar,\" takes on a matured insight through your poem.
November 2nd, 2017 23:12
Love Is a Very Hungry Caterpillar
FredPeyer said:
Bon appetit, Liz! Hope you don\'t go hungry now!
I find the caterpillar metaphor is both inspired and imaginative. Well written!
November 2nd, 2017 22:31
FredPeyer said:
Bon appetit, Liz! Hope you don\'t go hungry now!
I find the caterpillar metaphor is both inspired and imaginative. Well written!
November 2nd, 2017 22:31
A Bee and It\'s Flower
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to MPS, Elizabeth.
You posted a very nice opening poem. I do like the writing and I do like the structure, as well as the metaphor.
A sweet, sweet poem!
October 31st, 2017 23:23
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to MPS, Elizabeth.
You posted a very nice opening poem. I do like the writing and I do like the structure, as well as the metaphor.
A sweet, sweet poem!
October 31st, 2017 23:23
