Comments received on poems by StephenJames



Trip to the Stars
Friendship said:

Lovely written. Your poem revolves around the pursuit of dreams, the missteps along the way, and the eventual realization that success can be found even if the path taken is not the one originally intended.

May 6th, 2026 08:52

Trip to the Stars
sorenbarrett said:

Cute and nicely written

May 5th, 2026 21:38

It has Sprung
sorenbarrett said:

How closely our mood is tied to the weather this poem paints the picture well and seems to melt in the reader\'s eyes. Well done

February 18th, 2026 12:02

I try
sorenbarrett said:

The multiple usage of the word try emphasizes it and strengthens it in the poem. Try we all feel we do. Well done

November 8th, 2025 03:44

The taste of salt
L. B. Mek said:

that rarity, of poetry
distilled: succinct!
a good poem, thanks for sharing

October 14th, 2021 04:12

Forgotten Memories
Alta H Haffner said:

Wow, I felt these words deeply, Beautifully written.

September 17th, 2019 12:10

Reincarnation
SoulMeetsBody said:

Interesting balance between hopelessness and hopeful.

May 23rd, 2019 14:04