Comments received on poems by StephenJames
Life pollution
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the message of this write. Nicely rhymed it carries the reader along on a human journey through exploitation of the environment and the introduction of waste management to pollution even our need for light at night and pollution of the dark. Well written
August 24th, 2026 08:10
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the message of this write. Nicely rhymed it carries the reader along on a human journey through exploitation of the environment and the introduction of waste management to pollution even our need for light at night and pollution of the dark. Well written
August 24th, 2026 08:10
Trip to the Stars
Friendship said:
Lovely written. Your poem revolves around the pursuit of dreams, the missteps along the way, and the eventual realization that success can be found even if the path taken is not the one originally intended.
May 6th, 2026 08:52
Friendship said:
Lovely written. Your poem revolves around the pursuit of dreams, the missteps along the way, and the eventual realization that success can be found even if the path taken is not the one originally intended.
May 6th, 2026 08:52
It has Sprung
sorenbarrett said:
How closely our mood is tied to the weather this poem paints the picture well and seems to melt in the reader\'s eyes. Well done
February 18th, 2026 12:02
sorenbarrett said:
How closely our mood is tied to the weather this poem paints the picture well and seems to melt in the reader\'s eyes. Well done
February 18th, 2026 12:02
I try
sorenbarrett said:
The multiple usage of the word try emphasizes it and strengthens it in the poem. Try we all feel we do. Well done
November 8th, 2025 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
The multiple usage of the word try emphasizes it and strengthens it in the poem. Try we all feel we do. Well done
November 8th, 2025 03:44
The taste of salt
L. B. Mek said:
that rarity, of poetry
distilled: succinct!
a good poem, thanks for sharing
October 14th, 2021 04:12
L. B. Mek said:
that rarity, of poetry
distilled: succinct!
a good poem, thanks for sharing
October 14th, 2021 04:12
Forgotten Memories
Alta H Haffner said:
Wow, I felt these words deeply, Beautifully written.
September 17th, 2019 12:10
Alta H Haffner said:
Wow, I felt these words deeply, Beautifully written.
September 17th, 2019 12:10
Reincarnation
SoulMeetsBody said:
Interesting balance between hopelessness and hopeful.
May 23rd, 2019 14:04
SoulMeetsBody said:
Interesting balance between hopelessness and hopeful.
May 23rd, 2019 14:04
