Comments received on poems by StrayBray Jaramillo



Pete Townsend
Goldfinch60 said:

Long live Rock indeed.

I too write Fibonacci sequence poems.

Andy

June 29th, 2020 00:35

Pickup Truck
dusk arising said:



June 28th, 2020 20:24

The Universe
Crystal Hope said:

Wow! A fantastic piece.

September 8th, 2018 19:53

Pickup Truck
StrayBray Jaramillo said:



August 16th, 2018 11:53

Flower
Eugene S. said:

Profoundly said and nicely done.

April 15th, 2018 11:10

Flower
Nicholas Browning said:

Riveting.
It\'s sweet in a way. I like it quite a bit. Well done.

April 15th, 2018 00:57

Golden Cane
Caring dove said:

i really liike this , love the feel to this one ! :-)i love the repetiton of the word \'\' golden cane \'\'and the ending .. the word \'\' flame\'\'

February 15th, 2018 17:30

Crooked Tree
Caring dove said:

oh , i kind of feeli sorry for this tree.. sounds different to other tree\'s, on the outside , alone and without company .. kind of sad .. good piece of writing

February 15th, 2018 17:28

HUE I
Caring dove said:

interesting and lovely :-)

February 15th, 2018 17:25

I Would Like To Be a Tree (no. 2)
_poorlyNamed said:

This is beautiful, I also feel this really deeply.

November 29th, 2017 00:36

Not Scientific
Edthepoet said:

Couldn\'t have put it better myself straybay. Excellent piece.

November 25th, 2017 18:29

I Would Like To Be a Tree (no. 2)
mariellewrites said:

nice

November 19th, 2017 19:12

Shadow Wing
jonnyc1 said:

Clever and unique, really great rhythm ...the picture brings the words to life and vice versa. Thanks for sharing.

November 16th, 2017 20:37

Nothing Is Forever Dead
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

November 12th, 2017 15:59

Nothing Is Forever Dead
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true, the spirit of all lives on forever.

November 12th, 2017 01:58