Comments received on poems by _le.hp
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Shadowbox15 said:
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Is a wonderful title as it is. It’s catchy, and describes the writing well. That’s pretty much all you need for a title.
November 14th, 2017 20:43
Shadowbox15 said:
You told me
Is a wonderful title as it is. It’s catchy, and describes the writing well. That’s pretty much all you need for a title.
November 14th, 2017 20:43
You told me
Shadowbox15 said:
Helloo Levi! I really enjoyed your poem! It was well explained and I loved the emphasis on the words of most importance! Keep up the good work.
November 14th, 2017 20:39
Shadowbox15 said:
Helloo Levi! I really enjoyed your poem! It was well explained and I loved the emphasis on the words of most importance! Keep up the good work.
November 14th, 2017 20:39
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LEVI ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ which I found very enigmatic. You tell us it is based on a real experience ~ but leave us to speculate. I\'m twice as old as you so I know that throughout our lives ~ we are given advice ~ and it never stops ! However there comes a time when we have to stand on our OWN TWO FEET and be independent ! I am pleased you are already starting to \"Learn for Yourself\" We can only learn by our own mistakes ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
November 14th, 2017 19:31
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LEVI ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ which I found very enigmatic. You tell us it is based on a real experience ~ but leave us to speculate. I\'m twice as old as you so I know that throughout our lives ~ we are given advice ~ and it never stops ! However there comes a time when we have to stand on our OWN TWO FEET and be independent ! I am pleased you are already starting to \"Learn for Yourself\" We can only learn by our own mistakes ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
November 14th, 2017 19:31
