Comments received on poems by jay-money



People
SLR said:

So true. Where\'s the fun in \"normal\" ? People talk about originality and personality but at the same time, they\'re trying to be like everyone else. What\'s the point? I\'ve always been \"different, weird, freak, strange, bizarre.\" SO many terms!! And all meaning the same thing. NOT like everyone else. (Like that\'s a bad thing!) And I\'m proud of it. Thank you for sharing my opinion and in such an original way! :-)

May 11th, 2018 19:27

The devil inside me
orchidee said:

He will help us. You may be oppressed, but I doubt you are possessed by a devil, not literally. Not that possession never happens to anyone, but it\'s often other causes, even things of our selves that may cause it.

January 26th, 2018 14:45

Love
jonnyc1 said:

Very revealing, the rhythm and cadence of this is great. Opening your heart and showing your pain is the good stuff of writing and being able to show that in the way you did is the amazing stuff.

November 17th, 2017 15:46

Darkness
jonnyc1 said:

\"Darkness surrounds me, blank and suffocating\" yes it can, well said. Please keep sharing some really good stuff here.

November 17th, 2017 15:42

Lost
jonnyc1 said:

This hits to the bone, you are not alone...it\'s why I write, to not feel alone, to ease the pain. Keep writing, check some of mine, I think you will relate. Thanks for sharing, very good write.

November 17th, 2017 14:53

Darkness
Tony36 said:

That is why I started writing poems. To deal with the darkness inside. Great Write

November 15th, 2017 11:30

Darkness
Poetic Dan said:

Well expressed, thank you for sharing

November 15th, 2017 09:47

Darkness
Drewp said:

Holding me together by the pieces.That line hit me. Resonates with me.

November 15th, 2017 09:19