Comments received on poems by cabalo_blanco
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Robert Southwick Richmond said:
Should be age restricted: at 81 I\'m entirely too old to be reading it!
Seriously, I really love this poem. It\'s good to think about a lover like you did!
A few editorial points: the past participle of \'weave\' is \'woven\', not \'weaved\'. I think you meant \'altar\' rather than \'alter\'. Do you mean \'lay beside her fire\' or \'laid her fire\'? If \'loves\' is a possessive, it needs an apostrophe.
December 24th, 2020 15:31
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
Should be age restricted: at 81 I\'m entirely too old to be reading it!
Seriously, I really love this poem. It\'s good to think about a lover like you did!
A few editorial points: the past participle of \'weave\' is \'woven\', not \'weaved\'. I think you meant \'altar\' rather than \'alter\'. Do you mean \'lay beside her fire\' or \'laid her fire\'? If \'loves\' is a possessive, it needs an apostrophe.
December 24th, 2020 15:31
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L. B. Mek said:
artfully done, but skirting on just the safe side of borderline (age restricted), lol
good read,
\'when I fell to you!\'
indeed, we\'ve all experienced a similar sensation of gratitude, at one time or another,
Happy Holidays
December 24th, 2020 05:35
L. B. Mek said:
artfully done, but skirting on just the safe side of borderline (age restricted), lol
good read,
\'when I fell to you!\'
indeed, we\'ve all experienced a similar sensation of gratitude, at one time or another,
Happy Holidays
December 24th, 2020 05:35
Suited
dusk arising said:
You are indeed blessed with a wonderful flowing use of creative poetic euphamisms as seen here.
A delight to read. So often one gets lost among euphamism but today i felt i travelled with you throughout this piece,
December 22nd, 2020 11:00
dusk arising said:
You are indeed blessed with a wonderful flowing use of creative poetic euphamisms as seen here.
A delight to read. So often one gets lost among euphamism but today i felt i travelled with you throughout this piece,
December 22nd, 2020 11:00
Dancing girl
L. B. Mek said:
good read,
like the element of \'movement\' in your structure to reemphasis the action words
Happy Holidays
December 22nd, 2020 05:25
L. B. Mek said:
good read,
like the element of \'movement\' in your structure to reemphasis the action words
Happy Holidays
December 22nd, 2020 05:25
Dancing girl
Goldfinch60 said:
A lady who means so much to you as can be seen in your words.
Andy
December 22nd, 2020 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
A lady who means so much to you as can be seen in your words.
Andy
December 22nd, 2020 01:31
Dancing girl
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good read. Have a Happy Holiday and Stay Safe.
December 21st, 2020 13:59
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good read. Have a Happy Holiday and Stay Safe.
December 21st, 2020 13:59
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME CB ~ Thanks for your first poem. Un Caballo Blanco ~ is a sign of PEACE and MPS is a very empathetic and peaceful site ~ I am sure you will enjoy it ! Loved the brevity and enigma of your poem ! Some of my Poems are Prayers ~ please check and of course Yellow Ribbons are a sign of Welcome & Togetherness ~ Yours BRIAN . Love your AVI ~ please check my Poems ~ Yours BRIAN.
November 17th, 2017 13:49
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME CB ~ Thanks for your first poem. Un Caballo Blanco ~ is a sign of PEACE and MPS is a very empathetic and peaceful site ~ I am sure you will enjoy it ! Loved the brevity and enigma of your poem ! Some of my Poems are Prayers ~ please check and of course Yellow Ribbons are a sign of Welcome & Togetherness ~ Yours BRIAN . Love your AVI ~ please check my Poems ~ Yours BRIAN.
November 17th, 2017 13:49
