Comments received on poems by Thegirlwhowrites



Unfinished
Nicholas Browning said:

A tad bittersweet, though still shows promise. Nice.

March 22nd, 2018 22:31

The ugliness of beauty
FineB said:

So true and poignant.

Thank you, the girl who writes.

Keep writing
FineB

December 4th, 2017 16:31

The ugliness of beauty
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 4th, 2017 14:55

The ugliness of beauty
phoebexmiles said:

This is so true.

December 4th, 2017 14:52

Beneath The Cloth
FredPeyer said:

Very well written, love the repetition of \'beneath the cloth\'. There is something about that expression that intrigues and draws one into the poem.

November 29th, 2017 20:00

Silence
Christina8 said:

These short lines pack a punch! I can identify with this. Absolutely great lines!

November 24th, 2017 15:54

Silence
katherined said:

simple yet poignant, lovely write

November 24th, 2017 11:11

Silence
FredPeyer said:

It is amazing how much impact three well written short lines can have!
I like it a lot, writer girl!

November 24th, 2017 10:53

Silence
Michael Edwards said:

A gem of a write

November 24th, 2017 08:18

The pain of you
Fay Slimm. said:

A powerful write on the pain love can present when given to the wrong kind of person. Thanks for sharing this saddest of writes.

November 23rd, 2017 08:58

The pain of you
Accidental Poet said:

They say, \"As one door closes, another door opens\". Hope your time of sorrow is short. Written very well.

November 23rd, 2017 08:46

The pain of you
DuKord said:

Very deep, very sad.

November 23rd, 2017 07:30