Comments received on poems by Celena



pleasure
FredPeyer said:

Very nicely rhymed, good structure, but the content started to melt my computer!
Well penned, Celena!

December 11th, 2017 23:55

pleasure
ron parrish aka wordman said:

lol,time to start round two,,loved it

December 11th, 2017 22:56

Stop the violence
FredPeyer said:

Kind of hard to read, Celena, but I get the gist of your poem. Well done! I am asking myself the same questions. Why is it that mankind is so viscous?

November 29th, 2017 03:36

Lost/Found love
FredPeyer said:

Welcome to MPS, Celena!
Love and life can be a real roller coaster and you expressed that well in your first poem here.

November 27th, 2017 21:25

Lost/Found love
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME CELENA ~ thanks for your first POEM ~ I enjoyed it because it was straight from your HEART ! As we get older I\'m 34 ~ still not a DAD (as far as I know !) but in Love & Life we all leave a trail of those we have loved and lost. Ghosts from the PAST cross my Path now & them and I always give them a bit of TLC (Tender Loving Care) and thank them for the Memory ~ OK Please check my Poems ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)

November 27th, 2017 19:31