Comments received on poems by Rosette1206
Cold
Christina8 said:
Very well written. From experience, I know that fear makes life seem cold. it just gets easier to deal with as you age. Great job!
December 14th, 2017 15:09
Christina8 said:
Very well written. From experience, I know that fear makes life seem cold. it just gets easier to deal with as you age. Great job!
December 14th, 2017 15:09
Cold
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Welcome ROSETTE ~ It is so so sad that a lovely girl ~ as young as you ~ should be miserable ! I love Japanese Poetry and Tankas (57577) with their two extra lines give more scope for expression than HAIKU (575) ! I agree with you FEAR also makes me cold ~ But the older I get the more I can cope with fear. Please check my POEMS ! MPS is a very empathetic site and I am sure you will get lots of support and encouragement ! Despite the subject of your Poem ~ it is very elegantly written ~ more please ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
December 14th, 2017 11:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Welcome ROSETTE ~ It is so so sad that a lovely girl ~ as young as you ~ should be miserable ! I love Japanese Poetry and Tankas (57577) with their two extra lines give more scope for expression than HAIKU (575) ! I agree with you FEAR also makes me cold ~ But the older I get the more I can cope with fear. Please check my POEMS ! MPS is a very empathetic site and I am sure you will get lots of support and encouragement ! Despite the subject of your Poem ~ it is very elegantly written ~ more please ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
December 14th, 2017 11:37
