Comments received on poems by sarahyshoop
Anxiety Attack
Syd said:
I\'ve been down, still going down that road. Stay strong Sarahyshoop. Great poem - Syd
December 21st, 2017 19:50
Syd said:
I\'ve been down, still going down that road. Stay strong Sarahyshoop. Great poem - Syd
December 21st, 2017 19:50
It\'s All Or Nothing
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS SARAH ~ In the 21st C ~ there is so much Hypocrisy and Falsehood ~ it\'s nice to find someone with inner resolve ~ a Lady who is a Lady of her WORD ! The areas you hilite in verse 1. are key to Life & Love: Love ~ Hate ~ Forgiveness ~ Hurt ~ Lying ~ Kindness we must be positive in these areas and not vacillate ! Being double-minded is weakness and leads to instability.
In verse 2. you show great resolve to: Heal ~ Strengthen ~ Change ~ Keep silent ~ This again shows strength of character. Without resolve we perish ~ thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
December 19th, 2017 18:52
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS SARAH ~ In the 21st C ~ there is so much Hypocrisy and Falsehood ~ it\'s nice to find someone with inner resolve ~ a Lady who is a Lady of her WORD ! The areas you hilite in verse 1. are key to Life & Love: Love ~ Hate ~ Forgiveness ~ Hurt ~ Lying ~ Kindness we must be positive in these areas and not vacillate ! Being double-minded is weakness and leads to instability.
In verse 2. you show great resolve to: Heal ~ Strengthen ~ Change ~ Keep silent ~ This again shows strength of character. Without resolve we perish ~ thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
December 19th, 2017 18:52
Her
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SARAH ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ It is both Personal & perfect ! Repetition is important in Poetry and this elegant Poem leaves me in no doubt that YOU have a FEMALE FRIEND ! A FRIEND who is as close as a SISTER ! A Friend who has Value ~ Power ~ Strength ~ Perseverance & Love and is the SAME in Light & Dark ~ A Sister for Life ~ We ALL need a Friend like ~ AMEN ! Thinking of You & Your Friend ~ Every Blessing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
December 18th, 2017 18:16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SARAH ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ It is both Personal & perfect ! Repetition is important in Poetry and this elegant Poem leaves me in no doubt that YOU have a FEMALE FRIEND ! A FRIEND who is as close as a SISTER ! A Friend who has Value ~ Power ~ Strength ~ Perseverance & Love and is the SAME in Light & Dark ~ A Sister for Life ~ We ALL need a Friend like ~ AMEN ! Thinking of You & Your Friend ~ Every Blessing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
December 18th, 2017 18:16
