Comments received on poems by Ani Vale



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Jayce Elliot said:

Well written

January 13th, 2018 21:07

Merry Christmas.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing ANI ~ I am sure lots of MEMBERS will empathise with this one ! You can choose your Friends ~ but not your Family ~ BUT ~ You will find as you grow older ~ move away from Home Territory even Overseas ~ Your Birth Family become more distant ~ your friends closer and the presents you get more thoughtful & meaningful ~ Hope that helps ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my FUSION on Christmas Presents ~ Thanks B You click on the BOX ~ DEVELOPING to get into the latest FUSIONS ~ OK

December 25th, 2017 14:43

And It Hurts.
unknownlover said:

Good Job!! This describes my complicated life. I think you did amazing. Keep up the good work. And you aren\'t alone. Love you girl, keep pushing through it. After a dark thunderstorm is a rainbow!!

December 18th, 2017 19:26

And It Hurts.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME ANI ~ Thanks for your First Poem ~ which I enjoyed despite the Pathos of its content ! It is real poem full of RHTHM which vibrates in every word with the SADNESS and DESPAIR in your Young Life ! I am sure you found it CATHARTIC (Releasing & Healing) to write and share this with all of us. MPS is a very empathetic site and we all care and share your multiple burdens which you outline in your poem ~ straight from you heart ! PLEASE DON\'T CUT ~ That will only make things worse. Your Poem shows resolve ~ get above things DON\'T LET THEM SQUEEZE YOU INTO THEIR MOULD ! I found as I got older and became more independent ~ things got better and I could be my OWN MAN as you can be your OWN WOMAN ! Thinking of YOU ~ Praying for YOU ~ YOU can overcome ~ YOU will succeed ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)

December 18th, 2017 19:09

And It Hurts.
blacksheepBob said:

sometimes the best way to escape our sorrow is to write it down . And that beautiful release feeds our imagination to write more . Dont worry about what people think just write for yourself . Great job showing yourself to all who read

December 18th, 2017 18:40