Comments received on poems by c.hristinna
the first time i fell in love
BPIII said:
I sometimes close my eyes and see my first love.This write reminds me of that journey ,thanks for sharing,it\'s a wonderful piece of poetry.
December 28th, 2017 17:26
BPIII said:
I sometimes close my eyes and see my first love.This write reminds me of that journey ,thanks for sharing,it\'s a wonderful piece of poetry.
December 28th, 2017 17:26
the first time i fell in love
nancy akbari said:
I liked it a lot. It was very effective in capturing the emotion. Nsncy Akbari
December 28th, 2017 00:58
nancy akbari said:
I liked it a lot. It was very effective in capturing the emotion. Nsncy Akbari
December 28th, 2017 00:58
burn out
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI CHRIS ~ It happens and I\'ve seen a few burn out in my time ! Thanks for sharing ~ The short and sweet ones are the BEST ! Happy Christmas ~ Hugs ~ BRIAN
December 24th, 2017 12:34
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI CHRIS ~ It happens and I\'ve seen a few burn out in my time ! Thanks for sharing ~ The short and sweet ones are the BEST ! Happy Christmas ~ Hugs ~ BRIAN
December 24th, 2017 12:34
the sun and the moon
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI CHRIS ~ thanks for posting a Cosmological Poem ! I love all poems about SPACE ~ Please check my FUSION (click on DEVELOPING to see it !). We refer to BROTHER SUN & SISTER MOON but the traits are not exclusively MALE or FEMALE ~ I am much more LUNAR (An Encourager) the SOLAR (Assertive & Self-centred !) and you poem explores the clash of personalities between LUNAR & SOLAR ~ We sometimes forget that Planet Earth depends on the Moon (for \"light @ night\" ~ tides etc) as it doers the Sun for Energy (Heat and light etc !). When GOD fixed the dimensions and distances in the SOLAR SYSTEM he played a joke on the SUN ! The MOON like the EARTH is about 100 million miles form the SUN but only 250 miles from the EARTH It\'s diameter is 400 times smaller than the Sun so that when it becomes between the Earth & the Sun it blots it out ~ A Total Eclipse ~ The Sun hates that and it causes Cosmic Conflict ~ So \"Lunar\" People will always clash ~ personality-wise with \"Solar\" People ~ this can be M/F M/M F/F ~ OK Every blessing ~ Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
December 23rd, 2017 12:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI CHRIS ~ thanks for posting a Cosmological Poem ! I love all poems about SPACE ~ Please check my FUSION (click on DEVELOPING to see it !). We refer to BROTHER SUN & SISTER MOON but the traits are not exclusively MALE or FEMALE ~ I am much more LUNAR (An Encourager) the SOLAR (Assertive & Self-centred !) and you poem explores the clash of personalities between LUNAR & SOLAR ~ We sometimes forget that Planet Earth depends on the Moon (for \"light @ night\" ~ tides etc) as it doers the Sun for Energy (Heat and light etc !). When GOD fixed the dimensions and distances in the SOLAR SYSTEM he played a joke on the SUN ! The MOON like the EARTH is about 100 million miles form the SUN but only 250 miles from the EARTH It\'s diameter is 400 times smaller than the Sun so that when it becomes between the Earth & the Sun it blots it out ~ A Total Eclipse ~ The Sun hates that and it causes Cosmic Conflict ~ So \"Lunar\" People will always clash ~ personality-wise with \"Solar\" People ~ this can be M/F M/M F/F ~ OK Every blessing ~ Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
December 23rd, 2017 12:02
the sun and the moon
PoeticPsycho said:
Very powerful poem and metaphor you use to express your relationship. I hope your healing process turns out well and you move on from this with only the lessons. Take that and apply it to your next relationship
December 23rd, 2017 04:17
PoeticPsycho said:
Very powerful poem and metaphor you use to express your relationship. I hope your healing process turns out well and you move on from this with only the lessons. Take that and apply it to your next relationship
December 23rd, 2017 04:17
my favorite book
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME CHRIS ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ I loved it ! It was full of rhythm and Life & Love like all true poems should be !
Reading between the LINES it seem like you made a smooth transition form TEA to COFFEE and from PROSE to POETRY ~ but you still have nice memories about your EX which is as it should be ! Over the last 17 years I have fallen in and out of love but never acrimoniously ~ its just as one develops one acquires different \"tastes\" and Life moves on ! Your Mantra seems to mirror mine ! Better to have loved ~ and moved on ~ than never to have loved at all ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
December 21st, 2017 18:13
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME CHRIS ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ I loved it ! It was full of rhythm and Life & Love like all true poems should be !
Reading between the LINES it seem like you made a smooth transition form TEA to COFFEE and from PROSE to POETRY ~ but you still have nice memories about your EX which is as it should be ! Over the last 17 years I have fallen in and out of love but never acrimoniously ~ its just as one develops one acquires different \"tastes\" and Life moves on ! Your Mantra seems to mirror mine ! Better to have loved ~ and moved on ~ than never to have loved at all ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
December 21st, 2017 18:13
my favorite book
FineB said:
Thank you Christina M what a wonderful insight into the world of books.
An interesting poem. Thank you.
I just finished reading Far from the Madding Crowd and this is my favourite Thomas Hardy novel.
Keep writing
FineB
December 21st, 2017 17:09
FineB said:
Thank you Christina M what a wonderful insight into the world of books.
An interesting poem. Thank you.
I just finished reading Far from the Madding Crowd and this is my favourite Thomas Hardy novel.
Keep writing
FineB
December 21st, 2017 17:09
