Comments received on poems by certifiedtrash
Hello!
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for sharing your first Poem and something about yourself. I like the positive notes in your poem as a counter to the negatives ~ That is my Mantra ~ \"Accentuate the POSITIVE and subjugate the NEGATIVE ~ in Life & Love etc !
Bright Eyed ~ through crying (real paradox !) ~ Happy Smile ~ through practising (we all love a SMILER !) Husky ~ through screaming in your pillow (we\'ve all experienced that one ~ that\'s what pillows are for ~ to silence the screams !) \"O Yes ~ I\'m well now\" I like that ~ very positive ! \"How am I\" ~ Well I\'m OK too and I have a steady GF (Angela) and we are good for each other ! I was 14 (once !) and being a Young Teen is just as hard for Boys as for Girls ~ BUT ~ Just to encourage you ~ As you get older ~ get a JOB or go to College or Uni ~ you get more independent and it gets better each Year ! Also being a LONER is not a bad thing ~ You have more independence and much less Peer Pressure ! Every blessing ~ Yours BRIAN The way MPS works is: If you comment on others poems (please check mine !) they will check yours ~ also you can build up a Circle of MPS Friends ~ whose Poetry you like ~ OK ~ B.
December 21st, 2017 19:44
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for sharing your first Poem and something about yourself. I like the positive notes in your poem as a counter to the negatives ~ That is my Mantra ~ \"Accentuate the POSITIVE and subjugate the NEGATIVE ~ in Life & Love etc !
Bright Eyed ~ through crying (real paradox !) ~ Happy Smile ~ through practising (we all love a SMILER !) Husky ~ through screaming in your pillow (we\'ve all experienced that one ~ that\'s what pillows are for ~ to silence the screams !) \"O Yes ~ I\'m well now\" I like that ~ very positive ! \"How am I\" ~ Well I\'m OK too and I have a steady GF (Angela) and we are good for each other ! I was 14 (once !) and being a Young Teen is just as hard for Boys as for Girls ~ BUT ~ Just to encourage you ~ As you get older ~ get a JOB or go to College or Uni ~ you get more independent and it gets better each Year ! Also being a LONER is not a bad thing ~ You have more independence and much less Peer Pressure ! Every blessing ~ Yours BRIAN The way MPS works is: If you comment on others poems (please check mine !) they will check yours ~ also you can build up a Circle of MPS Friends ~ whose Poetry you like ~ OK ~ B.
December 21st, 2017 19:44
