Comments received on poems by aylissadanielle
Final Destination
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ALYSSIA !
Thanks for your First Poem ~ beautifully written with a very interesting SUBJECT with which we can all empathise ! \"Stop the World I want to get off\" We are all BORN (but NOT equally !) into the Roller Coaster of LIFE & SURVIVAL ! The Scientists now say 116 is max ~ so at the most you\'ve only got 96 more years of UPS & DOWNS and WINS and LOSSES of Life\'s Fairground and then we do have to meet the MAKER ! Loved the Poem ~ all Human Life is there ! MORE PLEASE ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
December 28th, 2017 13:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ALYSSIA !
Thanks for your First Poem ~ beautifully written with a very interesting SUBJECT with which we can all empathise ! \"Stop the World I want to get off\" We are all BORN (but NOT equally !) into the Roller Coaster of LIFE & SURVIVAL ! The Scientists now say 116 is max ~ so at the most you\'ve only got 96 more years of UPS & DOWNS and WINS and LOSSES of Life\'s Fairground and then we do have to meet the MAKER ! Loved the Poem ~ all Human Life is there ! MORE PLEASE ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
December 28th, 2017 13:15
