Comments received on poems by Elsie



Goodbye to the Cider Drinker
Elsie said:

Thank you. This was harder to read than to write.....

January 22nd, 2018 14:41

Why Can\'t I Slay the Dragon?
Elsie said:

Thank you Tepo, I wrote this a long time ago. It wasn\'t until my daughter was born that I found the strength to break away. Just a shame I lost my house!!

January 22nd, 2018 13:16

War of the Drobe!
FredPeyer said:

Elsie, I had a chuckle reading this. Really wants to make you buy something already put together! But I admire your courage! My wife would have dumped the whole thing at my feet. When it comes to putting things together, she won\'t even try. That\'s MY job! :-)

January 7th, 2018 10:40

Goodbye to the Cider Drinker
Elsie said:

Thank you for the lovely comments. I have dabbled with poetry all my life, but I have always been a \'rhymer\' lol. It\'s that compulsion to keep Dad\'s memory alive that pushed me to find this outlet, so I think I may pluck up the courage to publish some of my other more silly poems. But the standard on here is incredible. :-)

January 6th, 2018 10:21

Goodbye to the Cider Drinker
Goldfinch60 said:

What a wonderful tribute to your Dad, you obviously loved him very much.Welcome to MPS.

January 6th, 2018 01:30

Goodbye to the Cider Drinker
space_girl said:

Beautiful poem . I lost my dad in 2008 so I know your pain :(

January 5th, 2018 17:06

Goodbye to the Cider Drinker
FredPeyer said:

Welcome to MPS, Elsie!
I am sorry for your loss, but your dad came alive for me in your poem. Very tender and beautiful.

January 5th, 2018 16:02