Comments received on poems by Anthony Stafford
Why
Jhe said:
this poem seems so very honest, very self aware ~ my oldest son experienced some of the feelings you describe, including:
\"what I know is wrong feel so right but only at the very moment\"
...that used to freak him out the most, you know, the not knowing why on earth he said or did something he wouldn\'t normally say or do, and not being able to take it back...wondering if he should be on his own all the time just in case.
i know if he read this he would be glad to know someone else can relate, but he\'d also be sad because he\'d have an idea what you\'re going through.
i don\'t think yor heart was dark, i think some part of your psyche was confused or had blown a fuse and whatever else might have caused that it\'s possible that you are just too kind deep inside to cope with all the b#sh#
sometimes people have to switch off to survive ~ it\'s not cold it\'s mega sensitive...
good luck with all your poetry, J
June 9th, 2018 13:42
Jhe said:
this poem seems so very honest, very self aware ~ my oldest son experienced some of the feelings you describe, including:
\"what I know is wrong feel so right but only at the very moment\"
...that used to freak him out the most, you know, the not knowing why on earth he said or did something he wouldn\'t normally say or do, and not being able to take it back...wondering if he should be on his own all the time just in case.
i know if he read this he would be glad to know someone else can relate, but he\'d also be sad because he\'d have an idea what you\'re going through.
i don\'t think yor heart was dark, i think some part of your psyche was confused or had blown a fuse and whatever else might have caused that it\'s possible that you are just too kind deep inside to cope with all the b#sh#
sometimes people have to switch off to survive ~ it\'s not cold it\'s mega sensitive...
good luck with all your poetry, J
June 9th, 2018 13:42
Mother
FredPeyer said:
A very beautiful declaration of love for your mom! Like it! Mothers are the best!
February 4th, 2018 03:58
FredPeyer said:
A very beautiful declaration of love for your mom! Like it! Mothers are the best!
February 4th, 2018 03:58
Less
FredPeyer said:
Podno, this is great! Hope you can become fearless again!
January 31st, 2018 01:34
FredPeyer said:
Podno, this is great! Hope you can become fearless again!
January 31st, 2018 01:34
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Lorna said:
Donald Trump did that to you......... he\'ll go away eventually.
January 30th, 2018 04:25
Lorna said:
Donald Trump did that to you......... he\'ll go away eventually.
January 30th, 2018 04:25
Why
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
hello , i like you speak of your depression becoming a part of you , like the day and night is to the earth . the only thing i would say in reference to this piece id that the punctuation seems to be lacking , this looks like prose, not a poem , maybe if you layed it out different it may look better , but you seem to express how much it is part of you , and it is so true, it definatley can feel a huge part of us . i hope my constructive criticsm was taken ok :-) it just might look a bit better layed out differently
January 24th, 2018 01:42
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
hello , i like you speak of your depression becoming a part of you , like the day and night is to the earth . the only thing i would say in reference to this piece id that the punctuation seems to be lacking , this looks like prose, not a poem , maybe if you layed it out different it may look better , but you seem to express how much it is part of you , and it is so true, it definatley can feel a huge part of us . i hope my constructive criticsm was taken ok :-) it just might look a bit better layed out differently
January 24th, 2018 01:42
This seed
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
interesting enjoyable read ... being under the soil would be very dark indeed but being a seed we can make our way on out , maybe into a flower who can see everything clearly .. very nicely done
January 19th, 2018 14:18
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
interesting enjoyable read ... being under the soil would be very dark indeed but being a seed we can make our way on out , maybe into a flower who can see everything clearly .. very nicely done
January 19th, 2018 14:18
Just leave me alone
Anthony Stafford said:
Thank you very much and you do the same
January 14th, 2018 14:56
Anthony Stafford said:
Thank you very much and you do the same
January 14th, 2018 14:56
Just leave me alone
Chloe Rachel Flisher said:
Anthony what a well writ piece. It is relatable, and holds emotion. Well done. Keep up the good work. CR x
January 14th, 2018 14:54
Chloe Rachel Flisher said:
Anthony what a well writ piece. It is relatable, and holds emotion. Well done. Keep up the good work. CR x
January 14th, 2018 14:54
It is time
orchidee said:
Where ya been the last 31 years then?! Good to see ya! hehee.
January 8th, 2018 12:30
orchidee said:
Where ya been the last 31 years then?! Good to see ya! hehee.
January 8th, 2018 12:30
It is time
Anthony Stafford said:
The thoughts of a madman
Anthony Philemon podno Stafford
Look it up
January 8th, 2018 04:19
Anthony Stafford said:
The thoughts of a madman
Anthony Philemon podno Stafford
Look it up
January 8th, 2018 04:19
