Comments received on poems by hiandbyes
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Lorna said:
Your teacher is dim............ tell her to turn her light on.
January 20th, 2018 06:04
Lorna said:
Your teacher is dim............ tell her to turn her light on.
January 20th, 2018 06:04
Just a flower
Lorna said:
God this is good! I love inanimate objects speaking to us and for us.
January 20th, 2018 06:02
Lorna said:
God this is good! I love inanimate objects speaking to us and for us.
January 20th, 2018 06:02
Just a flower
Poetic Dan said:
Inspirational work... Short of words but not of feeling. Thank you kindly
January 19th, 2018 18:19
Poetic Dan said:
Inspirational work... Short of words but not of feeling. Thank you kindly
January 19th, 2018 18:19
Just a flower
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
hello , i completely love this poem , so lovely , so beautiful .. :-) you feel like this girl has more to offer and you do not feel enough for him , i love how you spoke of yourself as one small flower , her as the garden and your wish for him to take a look deep into your petals, the ending is just great! so true, so true , roses have a lot a lot of thorns and a whole field of roses .. lol , wow he would get hurt .. brilliant piece of writing , i really enjoyed reading this
January 19th, 2018 17:23
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
hello , i completely love this poem , so lovely , so beautiful .. :-) you feel like this girl has more to offer and you do not feel enough for him , i love how you spoke of yourself as one small flower , her as the garden and your wish for him to take a look deep into your petals, the ending is just great! so true, so true , roses have a lot a lot of thorns and a whole field of roses .. lol , wow he would get hurt .. brilliant piece of writing , i really enjoyed reading this
January 19th, 2018 17:23
who’s it due to harm?
Aislinn Wilson said:
This hits close to home, and having felt this I am filled with empathy towards you. I really hope things turn around if this still describes where you are at.
Poignantly written and well expressed however. This is a very beautiful piece.
January 15th, 2018 20:22
Aislinn Wilson said:
This hits close to home, and having felt this I am filled with empathy towards you. I really hope things turn around if this still describes where you are at.
Poignantly written and well expressed however. This is a very beautiful piece.
January 15th, 2018 20:22
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mrsbeaver said:
Oh my lovely, beautifully written, sending big hugs x x
January 14th, 2018 17:53
mrsbeaver said:
Oh my lovely, beautifully written, sending big hugs x x
January 14th, 2018 17:53
