Comments received on poems by Theskyisnotblue
Addicted
Maggie Maloney said:
I keep re-reading this. You are saying so much here...thank you for sharing this.
February 9th, 2018 17:26
Maggie Maloney said:
I keep re-reading this. You are saying so much here...thank you for sharing this.
February 9th, 2018 17:26
The taste
Burning Crow said:
I could feel the anger and emotion as I read this, We all have our demons and writing is a great way to vent them, I hope you and your mother find a way to conquer yours.
That\'s if this is coming from a real life perspective and not just a fictional write.
Either way great writing.
February 7th, 2018 02:29
Burning Crow said:
I could feel the anger and emotion as I read this, We all have our demons and writing is a great way to vent them, I hope you and your mother find a way to conquer yours.
That\'s if this is coming from a real life perspective and not just a fictional write.
Either way great writing.
February 7th, 2018 02:29
The taste
myself and me said:
I can feel your anger, your struggle. You are right about your mom, she is dying inside. Have you ever try to ask why. No one like to live in hell, she does not want either. She had her own problem, which made her feel despair, hopeless, and drinking alcohol became the way she escape from the problem, from the hopeless. She is suffering too. She needs love, needs support. I can understand how stressful you are, sorry, I do not have the solution for it. Hope you getting stronger.
Well expressed.
February 6th, 2018 15:36
myself and me said:
I can feel your anger, your struggle. You are right about your mom, she is dying inside. Have you ever try to ask why. No one like to live in hell, she does not want either. She had her own problem, which made her feel despair, hopeless, and drinking alcohol became the way she escape from the problem, from the hopeless. She is suffering too. She needs love, needs support. I can understand how stressful you are, sorry, I do not have the solution for it. Hope you getting stronger.
Well expressed.
February 6th, 2018 15:36
Grey world
rrivera138 said:
Your poetry is great, and intimately sad. The melancholy is expressed with much maturity which is hard to find in poetry at times. The traditional rhyming scheme adds depth and never feels tacked on. Good stuff. I hope you\'ll write a happy one for us some day. ✌🏼
February 5th, 2018 19:16
rrivera138 said:
Your poetry is great, and intimately sad. The melancholy is expressed with much maturity which is hard to find in poetry at times. The traditional rhyming scheme adds depth and never feels tacked on. Good stuff. I hope you\'ll write a happy one for us some day. ✌🏼
February 5th, 2018 19:16
POKER FACE
TrystanBehm said:
Great write! I know how (at least from my own perspective) this feels. It manifests itself differently in all of us, but there are some common denominators and I think you did a great job articulating something that connects people like us...
February 4th, 2018 15:15
TrystanBehm said:
Great write! I know how (at least from my own perspective) this feels. It manifests itself differently in all of us, but there are some common denominators and I think you did a great job articulating something that connects people like us...
February 4th, 2018 15:15
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