Comments received on poems by SarahJ
That Smile
Poetic25 said:
a broken format, which I have not seen before. But gives a reflection of how the author feels.
Nicely written
Michael :)
February 7th, 2018 12:05
Poetic25 said:
a broken format, which I have not seen before. But gives a reflection of how the author feels.
Nicely written
Michael :)
February 7th, 2018 12:05
That Smile
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SARAH ~ YOU WILL FIND MPS A VERY EMPATHETIC SITE ~ many of us have been where you are emotionally. Thanks for your First Poem. I love the fragmented style ~ it reflects your broken heart ! The smile on the face of a MAN is all too often the smile of a broken hearted CLOWN ! Thinking of you ~ Every Blessing for the FUTURE ~ Yours BRIAN
February 7th, 2018 10:16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SARAH ~ YOU WILL FIND MPS A VERY EMPATHETIC SITE ~ many of us have been where you are emotionally. Thanks for your First Poem. I love the fragmented style ~ it reflects your broken heart ! The smile on the face of a MAN is all too often the smile of a broken hearted CLOWN ! Thinking of you ~ Every Blessing for the FUTURE ~ Yours BRIAN
February 7th, 2018 10:16