Comments received on poems by lyn Girl



A dream
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

this was a great piece of writing ! well expressed. i guess its harder for the person who hasn\'t fully moved on , to get over those type of feelings

February 27th, 2018 11:15

A letter to my mother
Poetic25 said:

lyn girl

a piece that is packed with powerful emotions.
Its very difficult when we feel we are the ones \'carrying\' heavy burdens.
a sad piece, well penned.
I wish you well

Michael :)

February 14th, 2018 10:26

Nothing
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 10th, 2018 13:48

Untitled
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME LYNN ~ THANKS FOR YOUR FIRST POEM ! Lovely in Structure ~ it pulsates with Rhythm ~ but so so sad in Subject ! I can empathise because over the past 17 years I have fallen in and out of love ~ sometimes painfully ? I am in a positive relationship at the moment ~ see my Poem. I learn something from all my relationships with Ladies ~ so my Mantra is : \"Better to have loved & lost ~ than never to have loved at all !\" However experience tells me that that is a easier attitude for a Man than a Lady ! Every blessing ~ Thinking of YOU ~ BRIAN (UK)

February 9th, 2018 10:11