Comments received on poems by adam brown
addiction
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
hello adam ... a great expression of how addiction keeps you under its thumb , so to speak . it controls you , keeps you hooked , makes you miserable and yet we still are hooked on the addiction , despite its damaging effects upon ourselves and our lives..
\'\'the sound of my voice now amplified
to make you do as I decide \'\'
you have shown here how much control addiction has over a person and how we feel like control is out of our hands. well done
March 11th, 2018 05:22
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
hello adam ... a great expression of how addiction keeps you under its thumb , so to speak . it controls you , keeps you hooked , makes you miserable and yet we still are hooked on the addiction , despite its damaging effects upon ourselves and our lives..
\'\'the sound of my voice now amplified
to make you do as I decide \'\'
you have shown here how much control addiction has over a person and how we feel like control is out of our hands. well done
March 11th, 2018 05:22
breaking free
Tequilasangel said:
I really loved what you\'ve written, it\'s very relatable for today\'s audience. I really admire your strength, I wish I was able to gain control like that
February 9th, 2018 16:35
Tequilasangel said:
I really loved what you\'ve written, it\'s very relatable for today\'s audience. I really admire your strength, I wish I was able to gain control like that
February 9th, 2018 16:35
breaking free
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
hello brownie .. this is a really good piece of writing .. i love your sense of control towards the end of this piece \'\' i\'m no longer a slave, finally i\'m breaking free\'\' such a great realisation , to be free of that which is bad for you and to know you can finally take some form of control ..i love how you refer your struggles to walking in the rain with a ball and chain .. enjoyed reading this
February 9th, 2018 15:21
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
hello brownie .. this is a really good piece of writing .. i love your sense of control towards the end of this piece \'\' i\'m no longer a slave, finally i\'m breaking free\'\' such a great realisation , to be free of that which is bad for you and to know you can finally take some form of control ..i love how you refer your struggles to walking in the rain with a ball and chain .. enjoyed reading this
February 9th, 2018 15:21
