Comments received on poems by barbara
TOMORROW
bernard franklin said:
This is once again very good Barbara, You've taken a simply subject like 'Tomorrow' and poetically dissected it! Yet again your poem has provided us with strong mental imagery and meaning. Just one small point, on the third last line should it say YOU and not TOU??
nicely done . BF
August 26th, 2010 11:23
bernard franklin said:
This is once again very good Barbara, You've taken a simply subject like 'Tomorrow' and poetically dissected it! Yet again your poem has provided us with strong mental imagery and meaning. Just one small point, on the third last line should it say YOU and not TOU??
nicely done . BF
August 26th, 2010 11:23
I HAVE LEARNT
barbara said:
Thanx,i really love to write and i wish i could pursue it higher though
August 25th, 2010 12:52
barbara said:
Thanx,i really love to write and i wish i could pursue it higher though
August 25th, 2010 12:52
I HAVE LEARNT
bernard franklin said:
Very, very good Barbra, I really enjoyed this poem! You have a special way with words for someone so young. A poem full of pathos and poignancy, it also has good structure and meaning. BF
August 25th, 2010 10:48
bernard franklin said:
Very, very good Barbra, I really enjoyed this poem! You have a special way with words for someone so young. A poem full of pathos and poignancy, it also has good structure and meaning. BF
August 25th, 2010 10:48
what matters at last
barbara said:
thanx two.this is the frist time.people have rated my poems.
August 25th, 2010 06:34
barbara said:
thanx two.this is the frist time.people have rated my poems.
August 25th, 2010 06:34
what matters at last
barbara said:
awwwwwwwwwwww am so touched thanx very much
August 24th, 2010 04:33
barbara said:
awwwwwwwwwwww am so touched thanx very much
August 24th, 2010 04:33
what matters at last
bernard franklin said:
A very nice and moving poem, written with pathos it has good structure and meaning, it also draws on the emotions and has excellent mental imagery. I really enjoyed reading this . Keep up the good work! BF
August 24th, 2010 04:31
bernard franklin said:
A very nice and moving poem, written with pathos it has good structure and meaning, it also draws on the emotions and has excellent mental imagery. I really enjoyed reading this . Keep up the good work! BF
August 24th, 2010 04:31
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