Comments received on poems by barbara
Always a decision
Cheeky Missy said:
Very interesting and thought-provoking. A sorry saviour and impossible sinner. Curious dilemma. It harks to the "christian" gospel with familiar twists, yet seems unBiblical. Interesting indeed.
August 2nd, 2011 20:13
Cheeky Missy said:
Very interesting and thought-provoking. A sorry saviour and impossible sinner. Curious dilemma. It harks to the "christian" gospel with familiar twists, yet seems unBiblical. Interesting indeed.
August 2nd, 2011 20:13
what matters at last
Huzaidi Hashim said:
Strong and distinctly your style. I love it too!
February 16th, 2011 20:20
Huzaidi Hashim said:
Strong and distinctly your style. I love it too!
February 16th, 2011 20:20
I HAVE LEARNT
Huzaidi Hashim said:
This one beats the rest ... and since I've rated the others as 10, I guess I can't really express a higher rating, but if I could I would give it a 20
February 16th, 2011 20:18
Huzaidi Hashim said:
This one beats the rest ... and since I've rated the others as 10, I guess I can't really express a higher rating, but if I could I would give it a 20
February 16th, 2011 20:18
my MISSION
Huzaidi Hashim said:
Your style is distinctly unique. I love it!
February 16th, 2011 20:13
Huzaidi Hashim said:
Your style is distinctly unique. I love it!
February 16th, 2011 20:13
"Portrait of a Friend"
Huzaidi Hashim said:
Accepting your friendship lead me to read this poem. I like the way you deliver your message, simple, straight to the point, yet in a poetic style that differentiate you from the rest. For that I give you a 10
February 16th, 2011 20:09
Huzaidi Hashim said:
Accepting your friendship lead me to read this poem. I like the way you deliver your message, simple, straight to the point, yet in a poetic style that differentiate you from the rest. For that I give you a 10
February 16th, 2011 20:09
my MISSION
bernard franklin said:
You obviously have a mission in life Barbara, but you may have to wait many years before you receive any thanks for it. I liked your poem, if only all of us could give that much the world would be a better place. Nicely done ! BF
August 30th, 2010 06:15
bernard franklin said:
You obviously have a mission in life Barbara, but you may have to wait many years before you receive any thanks for it. I liked your poem, if only all of us could give that much the world would be a better place. Nicely done ! BF
August 30th, 2010 06:15
goodbye
barbara said:
i reaslly loved her but she betrayed me and left me.thnks u all
August 29th, 2010 18:56
barbara said:
i reaslly loved her but she betrayed me and left me.thnks u all
August 29th, 2010 18:56
goodbye
jabberm said:
very sad but life is but saddness and a couple of joys. deep affectin is like a lit candle it flickers but never out.thanks for sharing penpal
August 29th, 2010 13:30
jabberm said:
very sad but life is but saddness and a couple of joys. deep affectin is like a lit candle it flickers but never out.thanks for sharing penpal
August 29th, 2010 13:30
goodbye
bernard franklin said:
A sad and poignant piece Barbara, but very well put, you must have loved this person very much. The loss of a loved one is always hard to bear, BF
August 28th, 2010 23:56
bernard franklin said:
A sad and poignant piece Barbara, but very well put, you must have loved this person very much. The loss of a loved one is always hard to bear, BF
August 28th, 2010 23:56
TOMORROW
nikhilps said:
simple subject and expressed nicely, keep on writing... i liked it.....
August 28th, 2010 03:18
nikhilps said:
simple subject and expressed nicely, keep on writing... i liked it.....
August 28th, 2010 03:18
"Portrait of a Friend"
bernard franklin said:
What a wonderful poem Barbara! I give you 10/10 for this one. you have expressed beautifully the meaning of true friendship, You must be a very good friend to have. Keep-em-coming !. BF
August 27th, 2010 11:12
bernard franklin said:
What a wonderful poem Barbara! I give you 10/10 for this one. you have expressed beautifully the meaning of true friendship, You must be a very good friend to have. Keep-em-coming !. BF
August 27th, 2010 11:12
TOMORROW
bernard franklin said:
This is once again very good Barbara, You've taken a simply subject like 'Tomorrow' and poetically dissected it! Yet again your poem has provided us with strong mental imagery and meaning. Just one small point, on the third last line should it say YOU and not TOU??
nicely done . BF
August 26th, 2010 11:23
bernard franklin said:
This is once again very good Barbara, You've taken a simply subject like 'Tomorrow' and poetically dissected it! Yet again your poem has provided us with strong mental imagery and meaning. Just one small point, on the third last line should it say YOU and not TOU??
nicely done . BF
August 26th, 2010 11:23
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