Comments received on poems by themerrypapist



The Adversary
Lorna said:

This blows my mind. Your poems are not only wonderful but so crystal clear even when intense. To me you are the master! This reads like a play.....

March 7th, 2018 07:11

Hylomorphic Dysphoria
Lorna said:

You are a soul with wings! I\'m trying to figure out how to mark you as a \"favorite poet\" but can\'t so far!

March 3rd, 2018 05:43

Hylomorphic Dysphoria
Lorna said:

You are a soul with wings!

March 3rd, 2018 05:40

Hylomorphic Dysphoria
Ecelis20 said:

When I see this, I think of the really classic poetry. I\'ve got not words, because this is really outstanding!!!

March 2nd, 2018 14:18

Mourning for the Oracle
Lorna said:

I just hope you keep writing! I\'m loving the poems ... your years on the road paid off I think..... !

March 1st, 2018 02:51

I-5 Threnody
Lorna said:

Oh my goodness Merry - your command of your writing and the sense of humor in this one is fantastic. I\'ve always had a horror of digging up bodies and this started out so seriously and then took me by surprise! What a laugh but so well done! I\'ll never sit in a traffic jam again without thinking of this one......so clever.....

February 28th, 2018 04:32

I-5 Threnody
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, that Holy Voice will call you.

February 28th, 2018 03:12

Main Sequence Attraction
Lorna said:

An other worldly attraction - very soulful!

February 27th, 2018 05:09

Hymns
orchidee said:

I know - some places can be horrid - dingy, foreboding, cold, etc. Glad you found some coruscating now *got out dictionary to look it up!* lol.

February 26th, 2018 06:53

Hymns
Lorna said:

I\'m not religious but you have captured the awe I have felt whenever visiting a beautiful cathedral..... Russia, England, New York..... takes the breath away.

February 26th, 2018 05:08

Ad Limina
Lorna said:

So intelligent! Loved this..... won\'t you fill in a little of your profile so we know a bit about you?

February 25th, 2018 04:31

American Spirit
Lorna said:

Wow! This is fantastic...........you are favored, highly favored........

February 24th, 2018 04:45

Heliotropism
Lorna said:

The use of the \"hijab\" is such a powerful symbol of \"forbidden\" in this poem! Wonderful writing!

February 23rd, 2018 07:51

Nieve
Lorna said:

Yikes this was fantastic.........

February 22nd, 2018 07:08

Nieve
yellowrose said:

brilliant ending ! :-) \'\' they who in the face of all i contemplate keep striking , blindly striking, whirring, whining, hissing, striking at the snow \'\' .. enjoyed reading this,

February 22nd, 2018 03:01