Comments received on poems by smallest_stars



Endless Circles
DeviLove said:

Love the visualization this poem gives! Amazing work!

February 8th, 2020 14:58

Into Quietness
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good emotive write.
I do hope that wound will heal, time is a wonderful healer.

February 5th, 2020 01:53

Into Quietness
Nicholas Browning said:

\"I was to mend in time\". What a beautiful, sorrowful statement. It hits close to home. This poem is wonderfully articulated in a way that befits the narrator. I enjoyed the read. Best regards.

February 4th, 2020 22:06

Endless Circles
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

WELCOME FRIEND TO MPS ! It is a very empathetic site so you will get some positive comments ! Thanks for your first Poem. It is an excellent FREE VERSE POEM in 19 modulated lines which give it great rhythm ! It has thre distinct STANZAS 7 6 6 Which you have chosen not to separate ! I love the SUBJECT ! The stiring and initiation of the MUSE ! You have used some excellent phrases !
1. The PEN long dormant
2. The words spill out
3. Burning spirals of color
4. Leaving her to bask in its afterglow !
Our MUSES can be inspired by Situations - Music - Pictures & Experience etc. Brian & I are engaged and we often collaborate on Poems through SKYPE. BRIAN is in England - I am a PHYSIOTHERRAPIST in New Zealand on a work exchange ! Please check our POEMS - What US State are you in ?

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™

September 25th, 2019 16:08

Endless Circles
Poetic Dan said:

Absolutely brilliant!
Thank you

September 25th, 2019 01:12

Endless Circles
dusk arising said:

Yes i agree. When inspired, it is as if another spirit, another force, indeed a righteous force has overtaken me and commands my vocabulary.

A definite relief rests upon me then.

September 25th, 2019 00:34