I\'ll Fight
SLR said:

I\'ve read your other work and I don\'t know if you\'re having a good day or if you\'re getting stronger but this piece has a definite positive attitude that was missing in the others. Great job. Great message.

June 17th, 2018 23:44

Scars
Resa71 said:

Really like your poems.
I suffer from clinical depression, something I would never tell a soul years ago.
I know the darkness you speak of .
I\'ll be honest, at least this is how it goes for me.
I\'m in the darkness way more than the light.
However, I think I appreciate and enjoy the brighter times more than a lot of other poeple.
Hang in there!

May 5th, 2018 19:00

Whispers
elizabethshadow said:

Your rhyming scheme is strong and consistent, so great job with that! What you wrote of was so honest and true to many. I think that it\'d do you well to also write about how one overpowers the whispers of one\'s mind!

May 5th, 2018 17:52

Scars
Caring dove said:

i like how you have layed this poem out , and i also like the words used throughout this . a good poem :-)

March 5th, 2018 12:26