Comments received on poems by Mars❤
When it hurts
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI MARS ~ WELCOME TO MPS ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ more please. Love the shape ~ thin & endless like a lament over lost love ! Most of us on MPS have fallen in & out of LOVE sometimes painfully so we can (and will !) empathise ! I like the final line in your personal comment ! \"Every LOVE & HEARTBREAK is a Lesson and an an Adventure\" That\'s my Mantra too and it\'s refreshing to hear it from a Lady ! Is that BRONX New York or a City in another State ? I love all the US States I have visited ~ vibrant even IOWA ! Every Blessing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please visit my Poems ~ Thanks B.
March 6th, 2018 05:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI MARS ~ WELCOME TO MPS ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ more please. Love the shape ~ thin & endless like a lament over lost love ! Most of us on MPS have fallen in & out of LOVE sometimes painfully so we can (and will !) empathise ! I like the final line in your personal comment ! \"Every LOVE & HEARTBREAK is a Lesson and an an Adventure\" That\'s my Mantra too and it\'s refreshing to hear it from a Lady ! Is that BRONX New York or a City in another State ? I love all the US States I have visited ~ vibrant even IOWA ! Every Blessing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please visit my Poems ~ Thanks B.
March 6th, 2018 05:35
When it hurts
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
beautifully written :-)
March 6th, 2018 02:12
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
beautifully written :-)
March 6th, 2018 02:12
