Comments received on poems by missfit88
*POSITION×2-A DIRTY MIND*
Ian Primmer said:
Again, very real, brining the beauty of life’s treasured moments without fear, nice work.
September 7th, 2018 13:54
Ian Primmer said:
Again, very real, brining the beauty of life’s treasured moments without fear, nice work.
September 7th, 2018 13:54
*POSITION×2-A DIRTY MIND*
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MELISSA ~ In Love & War position is everything ~ There are 57 positions in the HEINZ Book of Love Soup. people in our Seniors Club @ College (where I give talks on ELVIS etc) tell me they revert back to REVERSE MISSIONARY (Girl on top) because the Men are too heavy and losing their LIBIDO (if they ever had one !) I\'m only half that age (35) Thanks for SHARING ~ Yours BRIAN Please check my POEMS ~ Thanks B !
July 6th, 2018 03:12
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MELISSA ~ In Love & War position is everything ~ There are 57 positions in the HEINZ Book of Love Soup. people in our Seniors Club @ College (where I give talks on ELVIS etc) tell me they revert back to REVERSE MISSIONARY (Girl on top) because the Men are too heavy and losing their LIBIDO (if they ever had one !) I\'m only half that age (35) Thanks for SHARING ~ Yours BRIAN Please check my POEMS ~ Thanks B !
July 6th, 2018 03:12
*A DIRTY MIND....Position×1*
Dai\'lynn Green said:
I gotta follow you. I love sexual poetry and your pretty good at it. I like this one and I look forward to reading more,if you don\'t mind...
June 17th, 2018 12:37
Dai\'lynn Green said:
I gotta follow you. I love sexual poetry and your pretty good at it. I like this one and I look forward to reading more,if you don\'t mind...
June 17th, 2018 12:37
*My Illness Seeks REVENGE*
Ian Primmer said:
By far the most real poet on the site. I looked all over to find that, it took all day. I needed that. Thank you.
May 22nd, 2018 20:42
Ian Primmer said:
By far the most real poet on the site. I looked all over to find that, it took all day. I needed that. Thank you.
May 22nd, 2018 20:42
*FORGIVE....IF YOU WILL*
Ian Primmer said:
I can\'t even explain how much I can relate to this poem. So real.
May 22nd, 2018 20:32
Ian Primmer said:
I can\'t even explain how much I can relate to this poem. So real.
May 22nd, 2018 20:32
*MOM*-R.I.P
Laura🌻 said:
Melissa,
We’re never ready...especially when we’re young! My condolences to you and your family!
From a Mother’s perspective, I love what you wrote about your Mom. We do live for our children. It saddens me to know that you never really had the chance to know your mom!
God Bless you and Be well!
~Laura~
May 19th, 2018 09:49
Laura🌻 said:
Melissa,
We’re never ready...especially when we’re young! My condolences to you and your family!
From a Mother’s perspective, I love what you wrote about your Mom. We do live for our children. It saddens me to know that you never really had the chance to know your mom!
God Bless you and Be well!
~Laura~
May 19th, 2018 09:49
*ARE WE THE SAME....?*
SLR said:
I\'m not sure I ever had freedom of expression. Maybe when I was too young to think negative thoughts or too young to be able to express them in the first place. I did draw the sun in the corner of the page sometimes though. But I\'ve always seen the earths million colours, but that might be because I was friends with the earth long before I discovered tv. Great write today.
May 18th, 2018 21:34
SLR said:
I\'m not sure I ever had freedom of expression. Maybe when I was too young to think negative thoughts or too young to be able to express them in the first place. I did draw the sun in the corner of the page sometimes though. But I\'ve always seen the earths million colours, but that might be because I was friends with the earth long before I discovered tv. Great write today.
May 18th, 2018 21:34
*ARE WE THE SAME....?*
Madiha Faizan said:
A very realistic piece of poem.. I really like it.. Time changes everything
May 18th, 2018 04:19
Madiha Faizan said:
A very realistic piece of poem.. I really like it.. Time changes everything
May 18th, 2018 04:19
*ARE WE THE SAME....?*
nmurner said:
Yes, we are
The bubble popped, and since then life has been violent sometimes, and I can\'t say for sure what or who I am. But, I have a lot more fun nowadays :)
May 17th, 2018 22:24
nmurner said:
Yes, we are
The bubble popped, and since then life has been violent sometimes, and I can\'t say for sure what or who I am. But, I have a lot more fun nowadays :)
May 17th, 2018 22:24
*MINI MELTDOWN*
SLR said:
I love the line, the same bad, familiar feelings have crept up once more. They do creep up. You\'ve written a powerful description of a tortured soul. Dusk is
right. Writing is great therapy. Pour it all into your work. And then share with us because so many of us have been through some tragedies of our own. Thank you for sharing today. Good post, love the f off you give the shame at the end! Just keep kicking it in the face whenever it tries to creep up!
May 13th, 2018 21:38
SLR said:
I love the line, the same bad, familiar feelings have crept up once more. They do creep up. You\'ve written a powerful description of a tortured soul. Dusk is
right. Writing is great therapy. Pour it all into your work. And then share with us because so many of us have been through some tragedies of our own. Thank you for sharing today. Good post, love the f off you give the shame at the end! Just keep kicking it in the face whenever it tries to creep up!
May 13th, 2018 21:38
*MINI MELTDOWN*
dusk arising said:
A frighteningly vivvid read. I know what it is to go down and down. Its a blessing that you were able to write such a piece, hopefully relieving some of your angst. Here on this site its a great way to administer some self therapy thru verse/poetry and hopefully get feed back too. You\'re definately in good company here.
May 13th, 2018 11:57
dusk arising said:
A frighteningly vivvid read. I know what it is to go down and down. Its a blessing that you were able to write such a piece, hopefully relieving some of your angst. Here on this site its a great way to administer some self therapy thru verse/poetry and hopefully get feed back too. You\'re definately in good company here.
May 13th, 2018 11:57
*A TOUCHING THOUGHT*
SLR said:
There is very little more comforting and as \'de-stressing\' as the touch of someone you love. Definitely a \"touching thought\" . Thank you for sharing.
May 12th, 2018 18:00
SLR said:
There is very little more comforting and as \'de-stressing\' as the touch of someone you love. Definitely a \"touching thought\" . Thank you for sharing.
May 12th, 2018 18:00
*SHOCK,SHOCK...REALITY*
SLR said:
Parents often try to scare their children straight when they\'re scared for them and feel helpless. It sounds like you quoted him word for word. Sounds like something my father would have said.
May 11th, 2018 22:54
SLR said:
Parents often try to scare their children straight when they\'re scared for them and feel helpless. It sounds like you quoted him word for word. Sounds like something my father would have said.
May 11th, 2018 22:54
*YOU WHO*
Lorna said:
What a sad age to lose your mother but this is a beautiful tribute - she\'ll never disappear......
March 18th, 2018 04:18
Lorna said:
What a sad age to lose your mother but this is a beautiful tribute - she\'ll never disappear......
March 18th, 2018 04:18
*EMPATHY*
Nicholas Browning said:
Some people just can\'t accept that this world is ever changing. Just do you, be yourself. Nothing wrong with that. Except if you\'re doing bad things, then that\'s not okay. But I\'m sure you\'re fine. Best wishes and regard. Keep up the writing!
March 17th, 2018 10:40
Nicholas Browning said:
Some people just can\'t accept that this world is ever changing. Just do you, be yourself. Nothing wrong with that. Except if you\'re doing bad things, then that\'s not okay. But I\'m sure you\'re fine. Best wishes and regard. Keep up the writing!
March 17th, 2018 10:40
