Comments received on poems by Wilted
5-5-21
L. B. Mek said:
lol, yeah we all been there
usually between that initially numbing effect - slowdown, of a third shot
and that punch drunk - enlightenment, of our unmasked superhero strength
after that crucial: just-one-more of ill-advised - fifth shot...
to stoically withstand that same solitary life
that now has us scribbling words of comfort
in the middle of the night...
(thanks for sharing)
May 6th, 2021 05:42
L. B. Mek said:
lol, yeah we all been there
usually between that initially numbing effect - slowdown, of a third shot
and that punch drunk - enlightenment, of our unmasked superhero strength
after that crucial: just-one-more of ill-advised - fifth shot...
to stoically withstand that same solitary life
that now has us scribbling words of comfort
in the middle of the night...
(thanks for sharing)
May 6th, 2021 05:42
12-8-20
L. B. Mek said:
I wish you the best of luck and even when that fails, we\'ll all still be around to wish it again and again, as long as it takes: till we find a way
December 10th, 2020 04:10
L. B. Mek said:
I wish you the best of luck and even when that fails, we\'ll all still be around to wish it again and again, as long as it takes: till we find a way
December 10th, 2020 04:10
3-27-19
Wilted said:
I appreciate that even though I\'m not near the talented writer that most on this site are y\'all are still so encouraging.
Thank you.
March 27th, 2019 10:24
Wilted said:
I appreciate that even though I\'m not near the talented writer that most on this site are y\'all are still so encouraging.
Thank you.
March 27th, 2019 10:24
3-27-19
Poetic Dan said:
The world just keeps on going off we like it or not!
Beautifully sad, thank you very much.
March 27th, 2019 08:55
Poetic Dan said:
The world just keeps on going off we like it or not!
Beautifully sad, thank you very much.
March 27th, 2019 08:55
3-27-19
dusk arising said:
We are all survivors of one trauma or another.
It is good to read your positivity shining through the pain you feel.
March 27th, 2019 08:53
dusk arising said:
We are all survivors of one trauma or another.
It is good to read your positivity shining through the pain you feel.
March 27th, 2019 08:53
3-18-19
Nicholas Browning said:
Ignorance is bliss, is what they try to tell you anyway.
Best regards.
March 19th, 2019 00:56
Nicholas Browning said:
Ignorance is bliss, is what they try to tell you anyway.
Best regards.
March 19th, 2019 00:56
1-6-19
Caleb.A said:
Always remember that you have a friend in: your pen, your words and this platform - also me!
February 8th, 2019 10:31
Caleb.A said:
Always remember that you have a friend in: your pen, your words and this platform - also me!
February 8th, 2019 10:31
2-6-19
Caleb.A said:
\'but not ready to kill this part of myself - beautiful. You show us that through the struggle there is strength, hope even.
February 7th, 2019 12:01
Caleb.A said:
\'but not ready to kill this part of myself - beautiful. You show us that through the struggle there is strength, hope even.
February 7th, 2019 12:01
1-6-19
psychofemale said:
I feel your pain. thanks for letting me know I\'m not alone.
January 6th, 2019 22:51
psychofemale said:
I feel your pain. thanks for letting me know I\'m not alone.
January 6th, 2019 22:51
9-26-18
clair jane said:
mine had me do the same, and i think it\'s healthy to look at the list and it helps you move on, a lot of people think since i\'m just a teenager i know nothing about pain, but the pain i feel is different, your writing is beautiful
September 26th, 2018 23:01
clair jane said:
mine had me do the same, and i think it\'s healthy to look at the list and it helps you move on, a lot of people think since i\'m just a teenager i know nothing about pain, but the pain i feel is different, your writing is beautiful
September 26th, 2018 23:01
9-24-18
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Your thoughts are very lucid. You don\'t appear to have any mental problems, as you\'ve stated in your personal profile.
I like the fact you\'ve told it like it is.
Keep writing and we\'ll keep reading. :)
September 24th, 2018 13:25
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Your thoughts are very lucid. You don\'t appear to have any mental problems, as you\'ve stated in your personal profile.
I like the fact you\'ve told it like it is.
Keep writing and we\'ll keep reading. :)
September 24th, 2018 13:25
7-3-18
Goldfinch60 said:
Your strength will always pull you through as is shown in your words.
July 4th, 2018 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Your strength will always pull you through as is shown in your words.
July 4th, 2018 01:09
7-1-18
onepauly said:
I did reread it. I think we both have the same problem. hows your orientation? anyway that\'s ok. its the mystery that keeps us going. keep writing you never know what you\'ll come up with. peace, onepauly
July 1st, 2018 23:33
onepauly said:
I did reread it. I think we both have the same problem. hows your orientation? anyway that\'s ok. its the mystery that keeps us going. keep writing you never know what you\'ll come up with. peace, onepauly
July 1st, 2018 23:33
7-1-18
onepauly said:
the date fits
and probably everything else
attracts great interest.
July 1st, 2018 18:06
onepauly said:
the date fits
and probably everything else
attracts great interest.
July 1st, 2018 18:06
6-13-18
Lalion said:
I was taught , \'One doesn\'t demand respect, one earns respect\'.
My dear mom, would say \'if I have never stolen anything, never borrowed money and never insulted you\' how can you possibly disrespect me.
June 13th, 2018 17:36
Lalion said:
I was taught , \'One doesn\'t demand respect, one earns respect\'.
My dear mom, would say \'if I have never stolen anything, never borrowed money and never insulted you\' how can you possibly disrespect me.
June 13th, 2018 17:36
5-30-18
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write. Sometimes it can be hard when you are on your own.
May 31st, 2018 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write. Sometimes it can be hard when you are on your own.
May 31st, 2018 00:43
5-25-18
Jhe said:
it is nice getting chores out of the way, and sometimes pleasant company can make it not seem like work at all!
lovely ~ thanks for sharing :-)
May 27th, 2018 07:19
Jhe said:
it is nice getting chores out of the way, and sometimes pleasant company can make it not seem like work at all!
lovely ~ thanks for sharing :-)
May 27th, 2018 07:19
5-26-18
Jhe said:
i once wrote a ghazal poem on the subject of having a clear-out that would rid my home and (\'therefore\') my head of things i might be better off without,
but even unhealthy sentimental attachments can riddle your un-cluttering mind with doubt...
and thereby make the whole process tricky.
i would therefore suggest caution;
if you\'re not sure if you want to get rid of something forever, pack it away where you can\'t see it, and if you don\'t miss it over the next eg 6 months, then dispose of it (recycle / donate to charity); if you\'re still undecided, leave it there for another eg six months / until you\'re sure that letting it go won\'t lead to regret.
best wishes, J
May 27th, 2018 07:11
Jhe said:
i once wrote a ghazal poem on the subject of having a clear-out that would rid my home and (\'therefore\') my head of things i might be better off without,
but even unhealthy sentimental attachments can riddle your un-cluttering mind with doubt...
and thereby make the whole process tricky.
i would therefore suggest caution;
if you\'re not sure if you want to get rid of something forever, pack it away where you can\'t see it, and if you don\'t miss it over the next eg 6 months, then dispose of it (recycle / donate to charity); if you\'re still undecided, leave it there for another eg six months / until you\'re sure that letting it go won\'t lead to regret.
best wishes, J
May 27th, 2018 07:11
5-23-18
Yorelzinala said:
Pesky demons! they like to stir things up. You can\'t deal with them all at once. Believe me, I tried. Deal with them one at a time. Don\'t worry, they will wait to deal with you. Patient little buggers they are. I look forward to reading your epic triumphs in your poetry.
May 23rd, 2018 21:00
Yorelzinala said:
Pesky demons! they like to stir things up. You can\'t deal with them all at once. Believe me, I tried. Deal with them one at a time. Don\'t worry, they will wait to deal with you. Patient little buggers they are. I look forward to reading your epic triumphs in your poetry.
May 23rd, 2018 21:00
