Comments received on poems by little dove



confusion
geige00 said:

I like the transition through out the poem. In front, falling, receiving. It allows the reader to flow nicely through its content.

January 28th, 2020 15:20

confusion
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write LD.

January 28th, 2020 01:17

confusion
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

This is a good write dove, I enjoyed reading.

Kind regards, Alan

January 27th, 2020 14:36

confusion
Poetic Dan said:

Wow what an ending, I feel it too! How can I break what I can not see....

Thank you for this
Always appreciated

Much peace and respect

January 27th, 2020 08:16

a fragile world
little dove said:

thankyou very much

January 18th, 2019 13:47

a fragile world
Goldfinch60 said:

Nature in all its glory and power.

January 18th, 2019 01:21

a fragile world
psychofemale said:

I love this :) very good!!!!

January 17th, 2019 21:22

harmless
orchidee said:

A fine write Dove.

August 20th, 2018 01:38

harmless
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write Little Dove.

August 20th, 2018 00:15

harmless
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS DOVE: Love every word in this delightful poem celebrating the mellowness & movement of nature! Your words morph into lines and the lines into perfect stanzas! The four elegant quatrains morph into a very elegant poem. The basis of all good poetry is WORDS! Please check my POEM : MELODY OF LOVE. Thanks for caring : Love ANGELA XXXX

August 19th, 2018 15:50

harmless
Crystal Hope said:

Your description was fantastic on this one. Nice job!

August 19th, 2018 13:00

whispering
little dove said:

hello. thanks very much

August 15th, 2018 15:04

whispering
Unsub said:

little dove,

an exceptionally visual & tranquil piece of poetry,

Unsub.

August 15th, 2018 14:57

gentle
Claudelle DeLuna said:

Beautiful!
I enjoyed reading it.
Blessings!
:)

August 12th, 2018 10:16

gentle
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS DOVE ~ For a very gentle and soothing Poem for Sunday Morning. Perfect images of CALM ! The gentle WOLF ~ The scarlett roses ~ Mountains holding flowers and Gentle showers ! The Indigo Prince and the Fairy ~ Golden hills ~ Five fishes and Yellow Sand from which the \"vulnerable pebbles\" take COURAGE ~ AMEN. Beautiful I\'m still digesting all the nuances ! Please check our Poem \"PRECIOUS LORD TAKE MY HAND\" BLESSINGS ~ Love BRIAN & ANGELA

August 12th, 2018 07:08

sparkles
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write.

August 5th, 2018 00:29

sparkles
Jo March said:

It is such a beautiful poem. I think it should simply make us think about how wonderful and lovely life really is. Thank you so much for sharing it.

August 4th, 2018 21:20

the soft colours
Heartwriter said:

You truly have a gift my dear. So lovely.

August 3rd, 2018 17:19

Judgement
Poetic Dan said:

This was amazing and beautifully sad, you brought back a memory of someone telling me that no one cares about my miserable life and I should just go under a rock and die. At the time I had my pride and thought it washed off, 5 years later it came up 3 months ago when on a healing session for my childhood trauma.

I must of felt this again because your writing felt so healing. Keep writing from your beautiful heart and you will attract and Manifest what you deserve, theses insensitive fools are blind to their own pain. At least your are true to your, that\'s bravery in my book.

Much love and respect

August 3rd, 2018 13:15

Judgement
Claudelle DeLuna said:

Hope your day gets better as the dawn of a new day awaits, don\'t lose your faith.
P.S.
The one\'s that disrespect you aren\'t doing to well they lack empathy. They might be hurting themselves, there is no more cruel human than the one that carries venom.
I have my only brother that has mental illness and I\'ve experience firsthand what others are capable of doing. May the power of God reign over you.
Blessings!

July 31st, 2018 22:30

Judgement
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

BLESSINGS DOVE: ANGELA HERE, It\'s 9:15 am Wednesday here in New Zealand. You are loved, all your friends on MPS Love you lots & lots. I\'m a Physio and a Masseuse and lots of my clients are very low when they come through the Door but Head & Shoulder massages soon puts them at ease. You say you feel neglected and like a trampled Flower and there is nobody there to love and support you, which makes me so so sad! Thanks for sharing your pain, we love and care for you and Brian & I pray for you. Sharing is cathartic and I trust our responses make you feel better. Please let us know. Love & Hugs, Your Sister ANGELA: AMEN ! Please check our Poems ~ Yours A & B.

July 31st, 2018 16:25

Judgement
Heartwriter said:

So sorry little dove. People can be cruel. Keep those writes coming. Great job expressing yourself!

July 31st, 2018 15:11

Judgement
little dove said:

thanks.

July 31st, 2018 14:39

The dragon
Heartwriter said:

You my dear write so beautifully. Like make believe come to life. Loved it!

July 29th, 2018 20:30

The dragon
Claudelle DeLuna said:

So very Lovely!
I love everything about dragons.
And this poem is beautiful.
I\'ve been compared to a dragon due to a fiery temperament, especially if I suspect injustice. According to Chinese lore I was born on the year of the dragon.
Favorite fantasy movie \"I Am Dragon\" 2015 (Russian)
Blessings,
**Claudelle** :)


July 29th, 2018 16:09

The dragon
Poetic Dan said:

Really interesting read, I imagined that dragon being an inner passion.
Thank you for sharing

July 29th, 2018 11:49

The dragon
dusk arising said:

Beautifully composed poetic fantasy quite lovely.
My mother-in-law would be thrilled to think someone saw beauty in her and wrote such wonderful words in tribute to her.

July 29th, 2018 05:56

magical land
kevin browne said:

And as beautiful and elegant as your poem reveals. Great loving write about nature.

July 27th, 2018 11:11

magical land
dusk arising said:

Beauty lies in the eye of the beholder. What eyesight you must have to write like this!

July 27th, 2018 10:29

magical land
Heartwriter said:

You write with a magic touch. So beautiful!

July 27th, 2018 10:00

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