Comments received on poems by little dove



rainbow
orchidee said:

A lovely write Dove.

July 26th, 2018 01:55

Olivia the little fairy
Heartwriter said:

Lovely magical write.

July 21st, 2018 14:59

Olivia the little fairy
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks DOVE for a beautiful FANTASY POEM that lifts us out of the MUNDANE on a sultry Saturday Night in England ! However it reflects Human Life ! We look at Fairies & Elves and other mythical creatures and think they have an idyllic Life ~ but as you point even Fairies want to be Mermaids. My MANTRA is to be contented what ever State I\'m in (I usually want be in Texas !) because Godliness with Contentment is great gain ! Please check my POEM today its about PRINCE CHARLES a Man who has never had a JOB (He\'s 70) because He\'s waiting to be KING ~ but HIS MUM who\'s 94 is Queen and there isn\'t a vacancy til she\'s called Home to Glory ~ So He\'s just a KING in ASPIC ~ Yours BRIAN

July 21st, 2018 14:54

Olivia the little fairy
little dove said:

thanks Hodgetiger

July 21st, 2018 11:48

a wish
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks DOVE ~ Dreams in essence are an expression of our sub-conscience dreaming of how we would love things to be. You have expressed these thoughts perfectly in your elegant poem ! Yours BRIAN & ANGELA Please check my Poem MADE IN MICHIGAN ~ Thanks B

July 20th, 2018 12:31

a wish
Jim Yates said:

Well penned Little Dove

July 20th, 2018 06:30

a wish
Joe Dawson said:

Very enjoyable - loved it.

July 20th, 2018 05:36

a wish
little dove said:

I will have a look later yeah

July 20th, 2018 04:57

a wish
dusk arising said:

Is this that \'somewhere - over the rainbow?\' ... So easily i could walk, sleep and dream in this world if only to dance with those bluebells upon wings of freedom.
Lovely fantasy writing.

July 20th, 2018 04:25

a wish
Michael Edwards said:

We can but dream - fine write

July 20th, 2018 03:53

a wish
Goldfinch60 said:

I could quite happily live there Little Dove.

July 20th, 2018 02:22

outside the window
lasergraph said:

A fine read.

July 19th, 2018 15:37

Swan
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS DOVE ~ Your elegant Poem paints a perfect picture of the SWAN V 1. gliding ~ sitting ~ majestic V 2. resting ~ free ~ sparkling V 3. artistic shape ~ glistening ~ beaming ! I love your similes ~ very descriptive \'A purple calm butterfly\' \'Free as the breeze\' \'In the darkness her snow white beauty still beams\' Saved as favourite ~ Thanks for sharing ~ Yours ~ Brian & Angela

July 19th, 2018 10:28

Swan
blessednloved said:

This is beautiful! Great write!!!

July 19th, 2018 08:46

Swan
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, I have written many poems about swans, they are wonderful birds and instil inspiration within us.

July 19th, 2018 07:55

Swan
Heartwriter said:

Lovely write. You described their beauty and grace so well.

July 19th, 2018 04:52

Through the eyes of a bird
Joe Dawson said:

From broken wing to flying high, a fairy story? No! Real life! An achievement in any language. Beautiful. JD

July 18th, 2018 15:43

Through the eyes of a bird
Heartwriter said:

Such a sweet write. Pure and flying free like the white dove! Beautiful!

July 18th, 2018 15:06

Through the eyes of a bird
OldPine said:

Fantastic

July 18th, 2018 14:16

Needing the beautiful colours
Joe Dawson said:

Already you are looking outwards towards the light - you will succeed. JD

July 18th, 2018 10:57

Needing the beautiful colours
Joe Dawson said:

That you are aware of the darkness and can express your feelings through poetry is a credit in itself - believe in yourself and you will prosper. JD

July 18th, 2018 09:54

Needing the beautiful colours
Michael J. Schaeffer said:

I love this poem. You are a great writer. You express yourself extremely well. I understand pain. The pain that is inside and is so deep it appears on the outside skin. You are wise for yourself expression. I read your personal information and we have a lot in common. I like a lot of Art. Writing, guitar, photography and just enjoying the language of expression. Your age is 33 years now. My favorite number. Jesus Christ died on the cross at 33. It was also my racing number that was assigned to in middle school to compete with. I had a lot of luck with it. It is a truly magical number. The Smashing Pumpkins have a song called 33. It was a very popular song for them. Youth and stay Youthful. Stay Young. Watch the World with Eyes Wide Open and Witness the Extremes. Don’t be Afraid to Take the Sidelines and Watch the World Scatter.

July 17th, 2018 21:41

outside the window
Michael J. Schaeffer said:

I like how you used another writing to inspire this poem. The poem is good. You left a note for your reasons for writing or inspiration. I do the same with a history book or movie. I use a form of inspiration. Their are many way of expression and inspiration. Creativity. Like a detective who digs to solve the case.

July 17th, 2018 20:14

outside the window
Joe Dawson said:

Hello Little dove, I applaud your work, a most enjoyable read. Keep it up. Joe

July 17th, 2018 19:45

Needing the beautiful colours
Poetic Dan said:

Beautifully expressed keep on writing and I\'m sure your inner dragon will take care of the rest. Flying high or burning away any unwanted darkness

July 16th, 2018 01:57

outside the window
Burning Crow said:

Great poem I sometimes do similar things to get inspiration some of mine come from music or story\'s.

July 15th, 2018 10:18

outside the window
Heartwriter said:

Beautiful write!

July 14th, 2018 17:09

outside the window
Michael Edwards said:

It\'s a good way of getting inspiration and it worked here. Also it was a pleasure reading something that isn\'t introspective - good write.

July 14th, 2018 14:46

Needing the beautiful colours
Jo March said:

I really enjoyed reading your poem! It is absolutely beautiful... I believe that the epitome of bliss is to jump into a garden of golden daffodils... And yes, the daffodils\' flames of gold \"hold tears from all the fear from all the pain\". I think once in a while we should all dream about pink flamingos and pink skies, like you said, because I strongly believe that only beauty can save us from darkness. Thank you for the lovely poem...

July 13th, 2018 18:49

Needing the beautiful colours
E-Poems said:

really enjoyed this poem!! I Love your work. ~ E

July 12th, 2018 14:35

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