Comments received on poems by little dove



Needing the beautiful colours
livsxxxx said:

Great poem!

July 11th, 2018 05:34

Needing the beautiful colours
Goldfinch60 said:

May the colour of you world dispel all the darkness.
Welcome to MPS.

July 11th, 2018 00:24

Needing the beautiful colours
little dove said:

This poem is in a way related to trauma and the world i feel i am in sometimes a world of darkness and my sadness as well at not being in that colourful world that I have created images of here

July 10th, 2018 22:25

Needing the beautiful colours
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME LITTLE DOVE (nice name) I like DOVES ! Thanks for you first Poem ! It is elegantly presented in five balanced free verse quatrains. Love the subject \"Needing the beautiful colours\" something we all need a rainbow coloured World ! I love your playful interchange of colours and things and the moods and reactions they evoke !
Red & Gold (flames) evoking fear & anger !
Yellow & gold & a touch of green (buttercups & daffs) evoking peace & calm ~ YES
When I am inside a Rainbow I can see & feel the colours but I can\'t bottle them ! Jumping into a host of wild daffs is awesome the ultimate Yellow Experience ! Dance like a Sunflower ~ holds back the Monsters & the Black Emotions ~ Don\'t let the Darkness swallow you PINK FLAMINGOES ~ sheer JOY ~ PINK SKIES ~ sheer peace ~ so Fly like a Dragon (I love that concept) be in the PINK and all the Darkness will disappear ~ AMEN I love this poem I could live in your Yellow ~ Gold ~ Pink World forever ~ so so sensuous ! Thanks for sharing ~ more please ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ MPS operates by mutual reading & commenting ~ OK ~ Thanks B !

July 10th, 2018 16:36

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