Comments received on poems by Trapazoid
To Be a Star
nmurner said:
I dig this. I really like how you showed me how beautiful a star\'s death can be.
If you look inside your eyes and see nothing but darkness, I think the thing to do is image something up :). If you can make it real, then you\'re shining.
May 17th, 2018 22:29
nmurner said:
I dig this. I really like how you showed me how beautiful a star\'s death can be.
If you look inside your eyes and see nothing but darkness, I think the thing to do is image something up :). If you can make it real, then you\'re shining.
May 17th, 2018 22:29
To Be a Star
MP Martinez said:
Such a wonderful piece! Really there\'s nothing more beautiful than a fleeting star served its purpose before fading away.
May 17th, 2018 05:35
MP Martinez said:
Such a wonderful piece! Really there\'s nothing more beautiful than a fleeting star served its purpose before fading away.
May 17th, 2018 05:35
Touch the Sky
SLR said:
This is really good. Well written, descriptive and makes you think. I read it FOUR times in a row before coming to comment. Great post!
May 16th, 2018 22:17
SLR said:
This is really good. Well written, descriptive and makes you think. I read it FOUR times in a row before coming to comment. Great post!
May 16th, 2018 22:17
To Be a Star
Lorna said:
It must be wonderful to be a star that doesn\'t question it\'s own worth and meaning....... people are the only animals that do that....... I agree with SLR - very thought provoking....
May 14th, 2018 07:13
Lorna said:
It must be wonderful to be a star that doesn\'t question it\'s own worth and meaning....... people are the only animals that do that....... I agree with SLR - very thought provoking....
May 14th, 2018 07:13
To Be a Star
SLR said:
Wow, such a thought provoking piece! And it\'s your first post?! Wow again! I love the last line. I wonder if others feel that someday they\'ll just vanish with the void wrapping them in warmth as you so adeptly put it. I\'ve also felt this way. Great post! Good flow.
May 13th, 2018 21:56
SLR said:
Wow, such a thought provoking piece! And it\'s your first post?! Wow again! I love the last line. I wonder if others feel that someday they\'ll just vanish with the void wrapping them in warmth as you so adeptly put it. I\'ve also felt this way. Great post! Good flow.
May 13th, 2018 21:56
