Lovely Boy
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME HOPE ~ Thanks for your first poem ! This is a gem in both Structure and Subject (LOVE !) The Structure ~ Triplets replete with Rhyme & Rhythm ! The consistent Rhyme pattern (aab ccb ddb etc) and metre gives it great flow and recitability ~ hallmarks of good poetry !
The Subject LOVELY BOY is a classic Love Poem and you leave us in no doubt where his loveliness lies ! Eyes ~ height ~ freckles (64 !) ~ crooked smile ~ listener ~ boisterous laugh ~ passions ~ dreams ~ brilliant mind ~ goofish actor ~ He\'s not Perfect but he\'s AWESOME !
I love listening to the rain with Angela and I wish she had written this poem about ME ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ more please ~ Yours BRIAN !

May 22nd, 2018 13:44