Petal After Petal
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME SOPHIIAA ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ Beautiful a very personal \"free verse poem\" written in prose form ~ OK ~ You could have written it in Poetic form ~ lines and verses as an alternative !

I was walking down the hallway
And he saw me ........................
The person I long to be with
My heart and body aches for him
But he one thing I love ........
About him is his smile !

That damn smile could hypnotise you
In just seconds from looking at it
etc etc etc

I loved the concept of the petals etc ~ awesome ~ I\'ve had experiences like that (unrequited love) and it hurts. Thanks for sharing ~ more poems please ! Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my Poems ~ thanks B !

May 23rd, 2018 04:03