Comments received on poems by rosel15
The Inside Out
LiterateLesbian said:
This touches me in so many different ways. It is a very eye opening poem. I hope by venting it out it helps you feel a little more ease. Stay strong :D
May 25th, 2018 16:12
LiterateLesbian said:
This touches me in so many different ways. It is a very eye opening poem. I hope by venting it out it helps you feel a little more ease. Stay strong :D
May 25th, 2018 16:12
The Inside Out
HangingbyaHalo said:
This made my heart hurt, Very Beautiful. Spill the roaring on paper and breathe life back into yourself!
May 25th, 2018 16:02
HangingbyaHalo said:
This made my heart hurt, Very Beautiful. Spill the roaring on paper and breathe life back into yourself!
May 25th, 2018 16:02
The Inside Out
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ROSEL ~ thanks for your first Poem ~ very challenging ! MPS is a very empathetic site and we like a CHALLENGE ~ You say you\'re already DEAD ~ but you\'re not a ZOMBIE ~ because you Breath ~ Smile ~ Twinkling Eyes and in my experience ZOMBIES don\'t smile & twinkle ! Poetry is very cathartic and I trust by sharing this poem (and getting a comment !) will make you feel less DEAD ~ sometimes I felt dead when I was TEEN ~ so I can empathise. The way MPS works is by mutual
reading & commenting ~ you can also build up a group of friends. I trust you will feel less dead tomorrow ~ OK ~ Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
May 25th, 2018 14:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ROSEL ~ thanks for your first Poem ~ very challenging ! MPS is a very empathetic site and we like a CHALLENGE ~ You say you\'re already DEAD ~ but you\'re not a ZOMBIE ~ because you Breath ~ Smile ~ Twinkling Eyes and in my experience ZOMBIES don\'t smile & twinkle ! Poetry is very cathartic and I trust by sharing this poem (and getting a comment !) will make you feel less DEAD ~ sometimes I felt dead when I was TEEN ~ so I can empathise. The way MPS works is by mutual
reading & commenting ~ you can also build up a group of friends. I trust you will feel less dead tomorrow ~ OK ~ Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
May 25th, 2018 14:10