Comments received on poems by dame84
Angel girl
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME DAME ~ Thanks for sharing a very beautiful first Poem. Elegantly written well spaced and rippling with rhyme & rhythm like a good poem should ! Nice to both read and recite. I believe in ANGELS and I love the concept expressed in this Poem ~ Those who live a beautiful life and die YOUNG are actually ANGELS just lent by GOD to beautify Earth for short time. I can think of THREE \"Young Ones\" in my circles ~ who lived Angelic Lives ~ Died Young and left beautiful memories ! I remember not being too sad at their funerals but feeling they had been sent \"for a purpose\" and had lived a \"full life\" and been called home again. Your perfect POEM confirms my feelings ~ Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
The way MPS works is: we read each others poems and ~ if we wish too ~ we comment ! We can also build up a cohort of MPS FRIENDS ~ OK Please check my Poems ~ Yours B !
May 31st, 2018 12:29
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME DAME ~ Thanks for sharing a very beautiful first Poem. Elegantly written well spaced and rippling with rhyme & rhythm like a good poem should ! Nice to both read and recite. I believe in ANGELS and I love the concept expressed in this Poem ~ Those who live a beautiful life and die YOUNG are actually ANGELS just lent by GOD to beautify Earth for short time. I can think of THREE \"Young Ones\" in my circles ~ who lived Angelic Lives ~ Died Young and left beautiful memories ! I remember not being too sad at their funerals but feeling they had been sent \"for a purpose\" and had lived a \"full life\" and been called home again. Your perfect POEM confirms my feelings ~ Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
The way MPS works is: we read each others poems and ~ if we wish too ~ we comment ! We can also build up a cohort of MPS FRIENDS ~ OK Please check my Poems ~ Yours B !
May 31st, 2018 12:29
