Comments received on poems by Shana



My One
Frogspoetry said:

This is a great poem.makes perfect sense when you love someone.

June 15th, 2018 15:31

The Angel and the Demon
HangingbyaHalo said:

I dont believe anyone ever truly picks a side, it is the nature of things to at some point be guided by both. I really enjoyed this.


June 12th, 2018 16:41

The Final Fight
Michela Vismara said:

I love the uplifting ending x

June 11th, 2018 12:36

Insanity Isolation
patiglacz said:

your poem is so amazing, i wish i could write so beautifully

June 10th, 2018 15:07

Facts
GON said:

Well done. Dab on the haters.

June 9th, 2018 10:29

Facts
Michela Vismara said:

beautiful x

June 9th, 2018 06:05

Colours
Lorna said:

Clever look at all the colors of your life.............

June 9th, 2018 05:59

The Puppeteer Girl
Lorna said:

I loved this!

June 9th, 2018 05:57

Lilith
GON said:

Interesting experimentation with a narrative, but I think you\'d do better with trying to write something a little bouncier. You don\'t have to be alone you know!

June 7th, 2018 01:20

The Other Me
Poetic Dan said:

Another heart felt writing, reminding me of times before I moved to Brighton.

June 4th, 2018 13:59

Shadow
(That\'s all I\'m Telling You) said:

I really liked the repetitiveness of:
I am A shadow

June 3rd, 2018 14:02

Shadow
poetboy5454 said:

That ending got me, wonderful job!

June 3rd, 2018 11:52

Shadow
booklover268 said:

That’s really deep. Great work.

June 3rd, 2018 08:11

Shadow
Poetic Dan said:

Brilliant, may we raise our inner lights so shadow\'s can dance all night.

June 3rd, 2018 03:32