Comments received on poems by jessleegrace
Drowning
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI JESS ~ WELCOME TO MPS Thanks for your First Poem ~ well written \"free verse\" with plenty of rhythm. The content presents life as it is and many of us can emphasise with the feeling of DROWNING in Life & Love !
Verse 3 highlights the problems of the Present and an uncertain Future ! Verse 5 ~ People who are Physically Present but Emotionally Absent ~ we can all relate to that and we all end up Drowning in Pain ! Thanks for sharing ~ more please ~ Yours BRIAN The way MPS works is by mutual reading and commenting ~ Please check my site ~ Thanks B !
June 10th, 2018 19:01
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI JESS ~ WELCOME TO MPS Thanks for your First Poem ~ well written \"free verse\" with plenty of rhythm. The content presents life as it is and many of us can emphasise with the feeling of DROWNING in Life & Love !
Verse 3 highlights the problems of the Present and an uncertain Future ! Verse 5 ~ People who are Physically Present but Emotionally Absent ~ we can all relate to that and we all end up Drowning in Pain ! Thanks for sharing ~ more please ~ Yours BRIAN The way MPS works is by mutual reading and commenting ~ Please check my site ~ Thanks B !
June 10th, 2018 19:01
