Comments received on poems by AmateurSomeone
Gods suite of armour
Goldfinch60 said:
That armour will never be pierced as the love of God is so strong.
June 26th, 2018 00:12
Goldfinch60 said:
That armour will never be pierced as the love of God is so strong.
June 26th, 2018 00:12
and why is my skin so important to you?
Snowflake Incorrigable said:
If I could throw in my penny\'s worth, the skin could also reflect certain health issues so one could comment in that regard, also it could be a metaphorical comment, I once said some looked dark meaning her attitude but it was seen as they had gone darker complexion wise, which wasn\'t what I meant . I think I would err on The GON side regards this discussion and I have never really agreed with The GON before.
June 18th, 2018 21:42
Snowflake Incorrigable said:
If I could throw in my penny\'s worth, the skin could also reflect certain health issues so one could comment in that regard, also it could be a metaphorical comment, I once said some looked dark meaning her attitude but it was seen as they had gone darker complexion wise, which wasn\'t what I meant . I think I would err on The GON side regards this discussion and I have never really agreed with The GON before.
June 18th, 2018 21:42
and why is my skin so important to you?
GON said:
I disagree that judgment rots the soul. Some judgment can be good, even social pressure that may prevent you or stop you from doing something foolish. Tattoos last for a pretty long time as far as you\'re concerned anyway, so I think paying close attention to exactly what you get tattooed onto yourself is probably a wise choice. That isn\'t to say that tattoos are inherently bad, but they\'re not something I feel should be considered without much thought.
June 18th, 2018 20:32
GON said:
I disagree that judgment rots the soul. Some judgment can be good, even social pressure that may prevent you or stop you from doing something foolish. Tattoos last for a pretty long time as far as you\'re concerned anyway, so I think paying close attention to exactly what you get tattooed onto yourself is probably a wise choice. That isn\'t to say that tattoos are inherently bad, but they\'re not something I feel should be considered without much thought.
June 18th, 2018 20:32
and why is my skin so important to you?
Frogspoetry said:
Of course it classics as a poem.and it is so true too.If you are comfortable in your own skin,that is all that matters.I have multiple scars from surgeries that people comment on how terrible I look,But,it doesn\'t matter what they say,every scar and tattoo tells a story about a certain time in our life.they are just another part of our unique stories.
June 18th, 2018 18:59
Frogspoetry said:
Of course it classics as a poem.and it is so true too.If you are comfortable in your own skin,that is all that matters.I have multiple scars from surgeries that people comment on how terrible I look,But,it doesn\'t matter what they say,every scar and tattoo tells a story about a certain time in our life.they are just another part of our unique stories.
June 18th, 2018 18:59
My possession (First Draft)
Frogspoetry said:
I think it describes how you feel.Check out my poem NOBODY tht is how I feel all of the time..Tomorrow I\'m posting one bout my anxiety.
June 15th, 2018 15:20
Frogspoetry said:
I think it describes how you feel.Check out my poem NOBODY tht is how I feel all of the time..Tomorrow I\'m posting one bout my anxiety.
June 15th, 2018 15:20
I Fear The Reaper
Frogspoetry said:
i agree with the others.it is great.i also fear for those that will keep on living,and their fate.I dont so much fear for myself,i am very strong in my faith and know where I will end up.But as for others,i don\'t know,that is a choice they have to make for themselves.keep it up,you are doing great.Every great poet has to start somewhere.
June 14th, 2018 20:36
Frogspoetry said:
i agree with the others.it is great.i also fear for those that will keep on living,and their fate.I dont so much fear for myself,i am very strong in my faith and know where I will end up.But as for others,i don\'t know,that is a choice they have to make for themselves.keep it up,you are doing great.Every great poet has to start somewhere.
June 14th, 2018 20:36
I Fear The Reaper
SLR said:
It speaks to me. Really well written and emotive write. Welcome to MPS! Definitely keep writing and keep posting! Great post.
June 14th, 2018 20:02
SLR said:
It speaks to me. Really well written and emotive write. Welcome to MPS! Definitely keep writing and keep posting! Great post.
June 14th, 2018 20:02
I Fear The Reaper
Alex Kay said:
This is your first poem? Wow, what a great start! I get the feeling that you\'ve done plenty of prose writing before this...OR you just naturally are good with words. Whether talent, practice, or both, this is a lovely little piece to begin your poetic journey.
I concur with GON, the flow is great, nice meter/timing. Has a very classic feel to it. Also, this is how to rhyme; it\'s not forced, it feels natural, and I especially love the slant rhyme of \'fight him...frightens\'.
I also second GON\'s encouragement. Please do write more. If your first turned out this well, I cannot wait to see the second!
June 14th, 2018 13:32
Alex Kay said:
This is your first poem? Wow, what a great start! I get the feeling that you\'ve done plenty of prose writing before this...OR you just naturally are good with words. Whether talent, practice, or both, this is a lovely little piece to begin your poetic journey.
I concur with GON, the flow is great, nice meter/timing. Has a very classic feel to it. Also, this is how to rhyme; it\'s not forced, it feels natural, and I especially love the slant rhyme of \'fight him...frightens\'.
I also second GON\'s encouragement. Please do write more. If your first turned out this well, I cannot wait to see the second!
June 14th, 2018 13:32
I Fear The Reaper
GON said:
I absolutely adore this. The flow is great, the message cuts into my soul, and it\'s not done in a cliche way.
Please keep posting; I\'d love to see more from you on this site.
June 14th, 2018 13:14
GON said:
I absolutely adore this. The flow is great, the message cuts into my soul, and it\'s not done in a cliche way.
Please keep posting; I\'d love to see more from you on this site.
June 14th, 2018 13:14
