Comments received on poems by Zipped Past You
A Mouthful of Silence
Stan Rodriguez said:
I would say nicely penned – but it too much to take in at one time – there’s a lot here – strong – descriptive – wonderful imagery – you just need to edit your work. Cut down to size. Thank you for sharing and keep them coming.
July 15th, 2018 19:02
Stan Rodriguez said:
I would say nicely penned – but it too much to take in at one time – there’s a lot here – strong – descriptive – wonderful imagery – you just need to edit your work. Cut down to size. Thank you for sharing and keep them coming.
July 15th, 2018 19:02
A Mouthful of Silence
ron parrish aka wordman said:
great work but i would post one at a time
July 15th, 2018 16:34
ron parrish aka wordman said:
great work but i would post one at a time
July 15th, 2018 16:34
A Mouthful of Silence
dusk arising said:
Too much to read! One at a time like everyone else please.
July 15th, 2018 16:24
dusk arising said:
Too much to read! One at a time like everyone else please.
July 15th, 2018 16:24
A Mouthful of Silence
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first POEMS all 25 of them ~ thank GOD MPS imposes NO LIMITS to length. I am still digesting it ~ But I wanted to thank you for posting such a POWERFUL POEM which bares your SOUL. I notice it has had 20 readings ~ so I thought it courteous ~ as a long serving Member to welcome you and thank you for posting an EPIC EPIC ~ Yours BRIAN. My Fiancee ANGELA and I share this site and she has posted the Poem today. A Beautiful rendering of \"How Great Thou Art\" in MAORI ~ she is on a Year Work Placement in NEW ZEALAND. Please check. MPS functions by us reading and commenting on each others POEMS ~ Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
July 15th, 2018 04:01
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first POEMS all 25 of them ~ thank GOD MPS imposes NO LIMITS to length. I am still digesting it ~ But I wanted to thank you for posting such a POWERFUL POEM which bares your SOUL. I notice it has had 20 readings ~ so I thought it courteous ~ as a long serving Member to welcome you and thank you for posting an EPIC EPIC ~ Yours BRIAN. My Fiancee ANGELA and I share this site and she has posted the Poem today. A Beautiful rendering of \"How Great Thou Art\" in MAORI ~ she is on a Year Work Placement in NEW ZEALAND. Please check. MPS functions by us reading and commenting on each others POEMS ~ Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
July 15th, 2018 04:01
