Comments received on poems by Raine Blair
Truths In The Sky
E-Poems said:
Love this, I like the repetition and the way you\'ve tweaked it. very lovely work! I look forward to reading more :) ~ E
July 16th, 2018 06:57
E-Poems said:
Love this, I like the repetition and the way you\'ve tweaked it. very lovely work! I look forward to reading more :) ~ E
July 16th, 2018 06:57
Truths In The Sky
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME RAINE ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ Very elegant replete with Rhyme & Rhythm and a lovely use of words & repetition ~ nice to recite ! Each STANZA draws gently to the inevitability of Death ! Stanza 1. I too envy the birds & bees & butterflies their extra degrees of and they make me value my LIFE ! S 2. However even in the Sky there are limits (I\'ve tried hang-gliding ~ scary) and it makes us think of Death ! S 3. Carpe Diem ~ Push the limits because ~ perhaps tomorrow we\'ll all DIE. Thanks for a great POEM ~ More please. Please check my Poems ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Which US State are you in ?
July 16th, 2018 04:55
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME RAINE ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ Very elegant replete with Rhyme & Rhythm and a lovely use of words & repetition ~ nice to recite ! Each STANZA draws gently to the inevitability of Death ! Stanza 1. I too envy the birds & bees & butterflies their extra degrees of and they make me value my LIFE ! S 2. However even in the Sky there are limits (I\'ve tried hang-gliding ~ scary) and it makes us think of Death ! S 3. Carpe Diem ~ Push the limits because ~ perhaps tomorrow we\'ll all DIE. Thanks for a great POEM ~ More please. Please check my Poems ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Which US State are you in ?
July 16th, 2018 04:55
