Comments received on poems by CarefulWhereYouStand
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dusk arising said:
Mesmerising. You tease us with fun. Though theres a hint of sadness and loss in there somewhere. Reading your two pieces so far on this site makes me wish i had begun writing whilst much younger cos i cant recall much of childhood nowdays.
Very enjoyable. MORE!
July 20th, 2018 03:41
dusk arising said:
Mesmerising. You tease us with fun. Though theres a hint of sadness and loss in there somewhere. Reading your two pieces so far on this site makes me wish i had begun writing whilst much younger cos i cant recall much of childhood nowdays.
Very enjoyable. MORE!
July 20th, 2018 03:41
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dusk arising said:
Oh i love this style of writing. You are gonna go far! Such a pleasure to read your writing. Love your humour whilst getting the bang message across.
I\'d like to see you comment on some of the stuff i\'ve done here because i think i\'d appreciate comment from you.
Definately going to look out for your works ahead.
July 20th, 2018 03:37
dusk arising said:
Oh i love this style of writing. You are gonna go far! Such a pleasure to read your writing. Love your humour whilst getting the bang message across.
I\'d like to see you comment on some of the stuff i\'ve done here because i think i\'d appreciate comment from you.
Definately going to look out for your works ahead.
July 20th, 2018 03:37
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Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, our parents started the making of our lives and if they set you on the right path you will not go wrong.
Welcome to MPS
July 18th, 2018 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, our parents started the making of our lives and if they set you on the right path you will not go wrong.
Welcome to MPS
July 18th, 2018 01:19
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ elegantly penned and pulsating with rhythm ~ a good read. It was ever thus the unwashed & unkempt House of the PAPA (Men are not good Housekeepers) and the pristine & polished House of the MAMA ~ it was ever thus ! I live alone in a FLAT only about 3 miles from my Parents (who are still together after 39 years !) ~ but I try to keep it PRISTINE especially when my Fiancee (ANGELA) comes to stay on Friday Night ~ She\'s on Work Placement in New Zealand at the moment ! Thanks for sharing ~ more please ~ please check my Poems ~ Thanks BRIAN (UK) Love the Music References in your Poem ~ I was born in 1983 !
July 17th, 2018 17:05
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ elegantly penned and pulsating with rhythm ~ a good read. It was ever thus the unwashed & unkempt House of the PAPA (Men are not good Housekeepers) and the pristine & polished House of the MAMA ~ it was ever thus ! I live alone in a FLAT only about 3 miles from my Parents (who are still together after 39 years !) ~ but I try to keep it PRISTINE especially when my Fiancee (ANGELA) comes to stay on Friday Night ~ She\'s on Work Placement in New Zealand at the moment ! Thanks for sharing ~ more please ~ please check my Poems ~ Thanks BRIAN (UK) Love the Music References in your Poem ~ I was born in 1983 !
July 17th, 2018 17:05
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Poetic Dan said:
Wow and I nearly didn\'t see you there
This was fantastically expressed
Thank you so much for sharing it
You took me to my past and now my kids life, I would what they would write.
July 17th, 2018 16:58
Poetic Dan said:
Wow and I nearly didn\'t see you there
This was fantastically expressed
Thank you so much for sharing it
You took me to my past and now my kids life, I would what they would write.
July 17th, 2018 16:58
