Comments received on poems by clareuk
My Dark Friend
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME CLARE : Thanks for your first POEM. Elegantly penned and pulsating with Rhyme & Rhythm. Love the repetition, hallmark of a good POEM
But I see you
You see me
I wont hide
Im awake now
Im watching you
Im outside
Also the subtle variation in the last two stanzas : awesome!
BUT as well as an elegant STRUCTURE a GOOD Poem must have a a GOOD Subject and your Subject \"INNER DEMONS\" complements the Structure! We all have them CLARE and in my experience : we all have to deal with them in our own way : OK I trust you found sharing this very personal Poem CATHARTIC. Thinking of YOU : Love ANGELA XXXX
August 19th, 2018 16:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME CLARE : Thanks for your first POEM. Elegantly penned and pulsating with Rhyme & Rhythm. Love the repetition, hallmark of a good POEM
But I see you
You see me
I wont hide
Im awake now
Im watching you
Im outside
Also the subtle variation in the last two stanzas : awesome!
BUT as well as an elegant STRUCTURE a GOOD Poem must have a a GOOD Subject and your Subject \"INNER DEMONS\" complements the Structure! We all have them CLARE and in my experience : we all have to deal with them in our own way : OK I trust you found sharing this very personal Poem CATHARTIC. Thinking of YOU : Love ANGELA XXXX
August 19th, 2018 16:17
My Dark Friend
dusk arising said:
Loved this. Know your demons, know yourself..... be whole, be strong. It\'s all in here.
August 19th, 2018 15:27
dusk arising said:
Loved this. Know your demons, know yourself..... be whole, be strong. It\'s all in here.
August 19th, 2018 15:27
My Dark Friend
misskay said:
Clare this poem is genuinely the best I’ve read, so relatable and truthful
Your writing flowed perfectly!
I now envy you and feel my writing can be binned lol
August 19th, 2018 09:31
misskay said:
Clare this poem is genuinely the best I’ve read, so relatable and truthful
Your writing flowed perfectly!
I now envy you and feel my writing can be binned lol
August 19th, 2018 09:31
